Blue Sun Room FICTION - ROMANCE

Of Softness and Steel - Part 4: Teatime

Sunday, November 6, 2005

Jaylee. Inara and Jayne bond.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3509    RATING: 9.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Inara prided herself in her ability to read the faintest flicker of emotion in a man’s eyes. It was one of the traits that made her the most sought after companion in House Madrassa . It was a skill that had never once failed her.

Until now.

The galley was, as always at meal times, chaotic. People talking over one another, the scrape of chairs on the floor, the clink of dishes being shared. She sank elegantly into the seat on Mal’s left, surveying the table and noting that Simon and Kaylee hadn’t yet joined them.

A few moments later they’d attempted to slink in unnoticed, but it didn’t take a companion to read the happy glow radiating from Kaylee, or the sudden and inescapable aura of satisfaction surrounding Simon. The others exchanged knowing looks and pointed jibes and even River was lucid enough to tease her brother.

Listening to the good-natured laughter around the table, Inara had filled her plate with the usual assortment of protein and raised her eyes to Jayne seated across from her. He joked with the rest, his teasing louder and cruder than anyone else’s and he managed to turn Simon four different shades of red by the end of the meal.

But he never touched his food.

Inara had watched him push it around his plate for near an hour, and each moment that he didn’t take a single bite, she felt the prickle of dawning realization. Suddenly, life aboard Serenity was making a hell of a lot more sense.

~

She gave it a few days, let him adjust a bit to the change in ship dynamics. Of course, adjusting for Jayne meant getting meaner and by the time Inara invited him to her shuttle, she was the only one on speaking terms with him.

When the knock came on her door, she sat up straighter and arranged her skirts around her. Her heart gave a surprised twist when he entered, instead of the bright orange t-shirt, worn pants and plethora of weapons she expected to see, he wore his one and only button down shirt, his boots were clean and his chin freshly shaven.

He lingered in the doorway, his

Comments
KNITTINGJEDI
Sunday, 06 November 2005 07:36
"There ain't no feelings!" Ah, men and their lack of acknowledging feelings....erm, I mean...the men of Firefly...<_< >_>
/Lovely/ story. I eagerly await your next one.
Sunday, 06 November 2005 10:21
Absoutely wonderful! Loved it to pieces! But there are nine hells Chinese mythology not seven. Your Jayne was priceless and so exquisite I wanted to hug him, loved that little dig at Mal at the end as well. Oh joy, Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Sunday, 06 November 2005 10:45
"There ain't no feelings!" Great story I've been waiting for part four. But Jayne...Kaylee tell me they're going to get together?
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 06 November 2005 11:07
I haven't laughed so hard in a while, "you using wiles on him?"
LOL
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 06 November 2005 17:32
More, more! Excellent job.
Sunday, 06 November 2005 19:06
He blinked and walked back out the door to check he’d gotten the right shuttle.

classic mal, almost as good as "huh?"

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ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 06 November 2005 19:27
Great snapshot story! You wrote the characters to perfection. Loved it and absolutely cannot wait for more!
CUB
Sunday, 06 November 2005 20:16
Very, very nice! This is one of my favorite things you've written. I enjoy your Inara, such a pensive and pretty portrayal, which works well when she plays off of Jayne. And the end was especially good.

Well done.
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 16 November 2005 05:33
Heheh very good.
Sunday, 20 November 2005 07:54
LOL! What a ride! It gets better and better. More would be just the thing, so please get to it. Fave lines: "He lingered in the doorway, his brow arched questioningly at her, and Inara got the distinct impression he was waiting for her to tell him this was a mistake." and of course: “Don’t look like nothing. Looks like wiles to me!” He glared at Inara. “Are you using wiles on him?” Dude! Wiles! LOFreakinL, such good Mal it makes me shiver.

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