Blue Sun Room FICTION - ROMANCE

Craving

Friday, November 4, 2005

Jayne has a craving

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3921    RATING: 9.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Just a touch.

That’s all he needed, just a brush from her hand. Just needed it.

Always thought that guys who craved drugs or booze were weak, not manly. He liked booze, a little herb now and then, but nothin’ that might ruin his edge, get him killed. But here he was not cravin’ herb or booze, but a girl! A little girl, just skin and bones really, but so pretty, so sexy, so not his he reminded himself angrily.

He had thought after Miranda that she and the doctor were happy and for a while it seemed so. After the doctor had saved her, Jayne was ready just to watch not interfere no more. But now Kaylee weren’t happy. Put up a good front, but somethin’ was wrong, was like Simon had problems with being close to her.

Given a chance to touch Kaylee, be close to her Jayne wouldn’t have no problem. Couldn’t understand how the man could keep his hands off her!

He just wanted to touch her all the time. Make sure she were alright.

Normally the craving weren’t this bad, but it’d been some time since he’d had a bit of time with Kaylee. Usually they worked on the engine or loaded crates together, played hoop ball or somethin’ but since her and the doc got together that hadn’t happened so much.

Crazy girl was sittin’ watchin’ him clean his guns. Since the craving started this time she was doin’ her best to keep him from sayin’ or doin’ something stupid. Seems she heard his gorram thoughts and in her way was tryin’ to help.

“Jayne” Kaylee came into the common area “can ya help me with the engine?”

He gave a few token grumbles afore getting’ up to follow. Truth be told weren’t just a touch he craved – was her. Just to be with her for a little, check she were doin’ alright, talk some.

Pullin’ the piece of engine out she wanted, he did as Kaylee told him, helping with the heavy lifting and such. Already he was feeling calmer, side by side fixing the engine hips, knees brushing now and then, shoulders leaning ‘gainst each other as they eased the parts together. Silky hair tickled his hand as she leaned forward

Comments
Friday, 04 November 2005 03:57
Yum.
One tiny complaint- too short. Want more.
Friday, 04 November 2005 04:27
Mmmm... and I needed a nice little Jaylee fic, too.

Thanks.

Friday, 04 November 2005 04:30
Awwwwww. I always get excited to see fic by you! This was so sweet and adorable. And I just love the exchange at the end between Jayne and River. Just perfect.
CUB
Friday, 04 November 2005 04:32
Love love love this part:

"Already he was feeling calmer, side by side fixing the engine hips, knees brushing now and then, shoulders leaning ‘gainst each other as they eased the parts together. Silky hair tickled his hand as she leaned forward concentrating on the job."

Nice little read.
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 04 November 2005 04:38
I like it! Very well-written, but too short. I like how Jayne is so Jaynelike, and River understands and keeps his secret.
Friday, 04 November 2005 07:58
It's great, very true to the characters. More please!!
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 04 November 2005 14:49
Very nice, love Jaylee, more please!
Friday, 04 November 2005 18:54
Very sweet, Jayne has a crush! Aaah, Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Friday, 04 November 2005 21:47
jayne ain't the only one with a cravin'...more please!

b
Friday, 11 November 2005 15:51
The title is so appropriate. Jayne doesn't just get a crush, he craves. I really like this. I keep picturing him brushing Kaylee's hair.

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