Blue Sun Room FICTION - ROMANCE

Motivation Series 4: Clean

Thursday, November 3, 2005

By VERY popular demand, a continuation of my previous fic, "Pretty." Simon, Kaylee, a shower...'nuff said. Very NC-17, the title may be "Clean," but the fic sure isn't...

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 4578    RATING: 9.0 (NC17)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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"You sure no one saw us come in here?" Simon asked.

"Yeah, though if that mind-reading sister of yours was anywhere nearby..." Kaylee pointed out.

"Don't worry, I also had a chat with her about keeping secrets." Simon turned away from her to secure the door to the showers. When he turned back, Kaylee was already shrugging out of the sleeves of her jumpsuit. "Let me do that."

"Like unwrapping presents, do ya?" Kaylee teased.

"Mm-hmm." Simon couldn't manage a more coherent response than that, he was too busy getting her jumpsuit off. As it pooled around her feet and she stepped out of it, he tugged her t-shirt over her head and dropped it on the floor alongside her discarded jumpsuit. Pulling her in for a kiss, he slid his hands up her back, unhooked her thin white bra. As the undergarment fell away in his hands, he lowered his head to her breasts, gently licking and sucking.

"Ah...oh, that's good..." Kaylee sighed, arching her back. "But you are way overdressed right now."

Calling on every ounce of willpower she had, she placed her hands on his shoulders and pushed him back firmly. Then she slid her hands down, enjoying the feel of his warm, solid chest, even through his dark blue shirt. The only thing stopping her from ripping it right off of him was the fact that she liked that particular shirt on him. She forced herself to unbutton it carefully, pressing light, teasing kisses to his chest as she worked her way down. She pushed the shirt off his shoulders and let it fall to the floor as he pulled her close and just held her for a moment, their bare chests pressed together.

"Kaylee." He murmured into her hair. "About what I said that night, about regretting not being with you. I...I don't want you to think that all I want from you is sex. You mean a lot to me. I don't know just what my feelings for you are yet. Just that they run deep."

"I get it, Simon." Kaylee assured him, speaking past the lump that had formed in her throat at his words. "Trust me, I feel the same way." She felt him re

Comments
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 03 November 2005 23:50
Oh. My. God.

Ok, now I need a shower, too. Cold. Very cold.
Friday, 04 November 2005 00:17
LMAO, will you always end a NC-17 fic with River? And the Mal thing was frickin' hillarious.

Btw... will Mal get a shotgun wedding arranged? You know what I mean ;)
Friday, 04 November 2005 01:49
very nice! loved it! Have river incorparated more... needs some more comic relief like that! awesome story!
Friday, 04 November 2005 16:15
You definitely have to write another one.

What's going to happen now that Mal knows? Will Kaylee fulfill Simon's desire of making love in an actual bed?

You can't leave us hanging. This is great. Keep up the excellent work.
Friday, 04 November 2005 21:08
"captain"

it was only a matter of time 'til someone wrote this fic...an' you done good!!! real good...

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ANONYMOUS
Friday, 04 November 2005 21:34
Wow, I would be lying if i didnt say i was aroused!
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 04 November 2005 21:34
Opps, that was me, Bizzrat
Saturday, 05 November 2005 17:03
You HAVE to continue this saga.
Monday, 14 November 2005 06:20
Excellent story with a very funny ending.
Saturday, 03 December 2005 11:39
Excuse me for a while, I need to go have a shower.
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 11 March 2006 04:00
LOVED the ending, amazing series so far :)
Monday, 01 May 2006 14:56

You write Simon really well, and I love River's little quips as well.

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