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If All the World

Wednesday, January 22, 2003

A short and fluffy "what-if" about Zoe and the pilot who bothers her.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 4514    RATING: 9.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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If All the World

Part 1/1

By Philomel

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Disclaimer: These characters and this universe are not mine, I didn't create them, and their owners still own them. I'm just borrowing.

PLEASE do not archive, print, or post anywhere else without permission. Please e-mail me and ask first. Rated PG-13.

Author's Note: This is my first Firefly fic, and it's fairly rough--it's pretty much fluff with Zoe and Wash thrown in there.

Feedback: If you have any comments, positive or negative, I'd be more than grateful to hear them.

Thanks for reading.

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He bothered her.

It wasn't so much about anything in particular, or even anything in general. He was just ...

Too irreverent, too glib, too compassionate, too ...

Maybe it was the insouciant smile, or the incessant quips, or those silly dinosaur toys that littered the bridge.

Maybe it was his ability to make a damned fine cup of coffee, or his need to always be in on every joke, or the slightly insecure quaver in a voice that was always rock-solid in a crisis.

Maybe it was the way he looked at her.

He just bothered her, was all.

Mal thought she was being ridiculous, and ignored her various complaints, until she kept quiet about them. He was the pilot, she was the first mate, and they had to find a way to work together. That was that.

And then it changed.

It changed on Sisyphus, a small planet just off the Core, terra-formed but mostly not too bad off, where they'd had their third major job. Wash had been their pilot for just over six months, Kaylee had been with them for almost five, and Jayne had been crew for not more than a few weeks. That much crew, the job had to be better paying than most--Mal had been worried about keeping Jayne happy--and then this contract just kinda fell into their laps.

It had been billed as a milk run, but it had paid really well, and it had been practically legit

Comments
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 22 January 2003 22:35
A truly enjoyable read. Excellent characterization... your understanding of the characters is clear in their actions and words. Your insight into Zoe's character is particularily striking. You also have a knack for beautiful prose... all in all, this rang very true to me. Keep up the good work. :-)
Thursday, 23 January 2003 05:43
VERY nice work. Don't stop writing Firefly fic! write write write, post post post! Thanks! ~Eleri
Thursday, 23 January 2003 18:53
Tremendous. But you already knew that. This can't ever, ever stop. This greatest and strangest of love stories.
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 23 January 2003 20:49
Nice work, good charachters...a wonderful view on how this all started...

You have a wonderful way of writing..please keep doing so...

Badger
Monday, 27 January 2003 00:27
Oh, thank you, Joss for sticking to your guns when it came to Wash and Zoe.

And double thanks to the writer who's put together this crystal clear window into it.
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 30 January 2003 21:25
Hey,

Expand on this. You got good characterizations here that are screaming to be fleshed out and added upon. Dammit, tell the whole story, not just the fun part! :)

Get writin'!

- RT
Saturday, 01 February 2003 08:14
Kick ass. All I'm gonna say.

Oh and this: "She was sitting on his bed, in the dark, and he almost shrieked like a girl when he saw her. As it was, he couldn't quite suppress a strangled and embarrassingly high-pitched noise." is perfect. Not only did I guffaw upon reading this line, but it made me think I was seeing it onscreen. Wonderful when a fic can make you do this.

Ok, that's all I'm gonna say.
BADGER
Thursday, 07 August 2003 19:10
Rough? Rough? Rough nothing. Brilliant, more like. Very, very brilliant. Damn you.
Sunday, 21 March 2004 06:25
Great story.
Saturday, 27 March 2004 04:53
Wonderful love story...the greatest and strangest is right! LOL! I love having this view into Wash & Zoe's past... Thank you!
Thursday, 10 June 2004 04:46
A brilliant characterisation of Zoë! I so can relate...

Write more Zoë stories -- she seems to always be left out of the fanfic.
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 06 September 2004 08:48
Very nice and sweet with SPOT-ON characterization which isn't always easy to find. Wonderful, wonderful...keep writing Zoe/Wash stuff pleeeeeeeeeease!
BELLONA
Sunday, 23 October 2005 17:03
the only rough thing i can think of would be a diamond in the rough reference (thank you mr disney!)

b

p.s. "he almost shrieked like a girl when he saw her"

ha. ha. HA!!!
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 04 January 2006 18:08
awww lovely... can we have some more please?

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