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Kassandra

Monday, August 4, 2003

Vignette. River contemplates.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 9693    RATING: 9.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Kassandra

Part 1/1

By Philomel

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PLEASE do not archive, print, or post anywhere without permission—please e-mail me and ask first. (I just like to know. Thanks.).

Disclaimer: These characters and this universe are not mine, I didn't create them, and their owners still own them. I'm just borrowing.

Summary: Big plot stuff here! But without cows. There shall be cows, but not in this fic. No monkeys either. Okay, I lied. There is no plot, and not even anything resembling plot-stuff. Just a quick vignette—no smut, no spoilers, and no cows. Originally written for the Firefly Friday fic challenge. (topic: "Trust.")

Flowers, chocolate, and a thousand thanks, as always, to Sarahetc. for shiny beta.

Feedback Supplication: If you have any comments, positive or negative, I'd be more than grateful to hear them.

Thanks for reading.

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There is a buzzing in my ears and through my toes. The air hums with it, and spins a counter-melody, and it echoes in my brain. The harmony is discordant, in minor sevenths, and it's all falling and laughing, like dust mites playing in the sun.

There was a piano in our house, many years ago, a baby grand in the traditional style of Earth-that-was, and I would play and play and play in the warm sunshine streaming through the picture window in the music room.

It has been seven months, four weeks, 66 days, and 11 minutes since I crawled out of the box into Simon's arms.

My mind trickles and ebbs and flows and adapts to all the chemical compounds Simon likes to experiment with. But right now, it is quiet. So quiet, I can hear the stars. I breathe deeply, the air refined and filtered in a 20% oxygen mix, and feel the life flow through me.

There was a time, I sat on my father's lap, and he read to me. The tales all began at the beginning, and they started with, "Once upon a time."

But I'm starting in the middle

Comments
Monday, 04 August 2003 02:44
Very nice Philomel. An excellent look at River's point of view. Very insightful look at some of the other characters as well. I especially like the bit about Mal.

"He is missing something, something never spoken, but screamed out, all the time."

Would love to see you explore that further, if I may be so bold as to make a request.
Monday, 04 August 2003 03:51
Phil, read this at the challenge before, can't recall if I commented. Very nice. Especially River's voice. I just can't get into her mind. but you did a lovely job
Monday, 04 August 2003 13:16
Ditto on Dave's remark about the Mal line, and let me add "Wash is honest, and it confuses him because no one else is." as another excellent one. Good work, Miss Phil.
BADGER
Wednesday, 06 August 2003 19:37
Very, very nice indeed. Writing from first-person perspective is horribly hard in itself. Writing from the first-person perspective of a crazy person should usually not be attempted without some sort of body armour. But Philomel? No trouble for him\her. You clever, talented get. Bloody well done.
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 10 January 2004 17:03
Wonderful piece - now I have to go find out what a Friday Firefly challenge is/was.
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 10 January 2004 19:28
Thanks for the comment--posted this a while ago, so it was a nice surprise.

As for the challenges, Tara LJC runs them, and they can be found here:
http://www.livejournal.com/community/ff_friday/

You need to get yourself an LJ if you want to play, but that ain't hard.

--Philomel
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 01 May 2004 13:12
Very nice characterization of river. One of the best i have come across. You might consider changing her vocabulary to include more "genius" language.she often uses random words and phrases that showcase her intelligence.
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 28 February 2006 14:59
Dear Philomel

I read your story Kassandra and I really, really liked it.
I'm working on a River and Simon homepage called "A Pretty Bad Planet" (http://www.prettybadplanet.com) and I would like to archive your story there. Is that ok for you? If not could I at least link back to it?
If you agree, you are also welcome to publish further River or Simon fanfiction on my homepage.

Hoping to hear from you soon, thanks in advance

Marlin Grey

Ps: Maybe you can give me your e-mail address so it's easier for me to contact you. Mine is: MarlinGrey@web.de

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