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In The Way - Chap. 3

Thursday, October 27, 2005

Kaylee's suspicions as tension mounts.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 2930    RATING: 8.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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A/N: This is dedicated to anonymous who promised me lot's of love if I continued. So, where's the love, uh?

Chap. 3 -

Something was wrong with Serenity.

Kaylee could feel it. In the same way she knew that the compression coil needed replacing or the buffer panel was loose, she could sense something off in the . . . aura of her beloved ship. It was driving her to distraction, that feeling of wrongness. She checked the engines, again and again, the stabilizers, the landing gear, life support, navigation. She took things apart, put them back together, flushed out systems, changed fluids, re-booted, tinkered, and listened, and tinkered again and could find nothing wrong. At least not seriously wrong mechanically. So what was this feeling she had, like one of the stabilizers was all wonky and they weren’t flying smooth anymore? And why couldn’t she find the problem?

After another long frustrating day of diagnostics and adjustments for which she had absolutely nothing to show, she had dragged her miserable carcass to the galley, too tired to even wash first.

Kaylee sat down at her place and acknowledged Book’s cheerful greeting with a tired nod. Eating absently, with her head propped in weariness on her hand she took a bit of rice and noticed Simon staring at her. That brightened her up. She began to raise her head to smile at him, flattered by the unexpected attention when she sighted something else. Jayne was looking at her too. When she caught his eye the big man looked down at his plate hastily. She frowned and turned back toward Simon but he was staring down at his food as well, studying it in the same way she had seen him stare at gun shot wounds, intent and serious as a preacher hearing confession.

What was going on? Kaylee felt a moment of panic. She hadn’t washed up before coming to supper, maybe she had some fearsome streak of something on her face that was even worse than usual. Taking up her napkin, she scrubbed at her nose in a way she hoped was covert. Glancing at the square

Comments
Thursday, 27 October 2005 17:58
aww.. that was great. good work. I love how you write Kaylee, just perfect. I hope there's lots more..
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 27 October 2005 17:58
Nice, more please!
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 27 October 2005 18:12
I love how Kaylee can sense the tension on the ship. Doesn't know where it's stemming from, but she senses it and that's SO very her.

And Jayne, still not knowing that Simon knows. *loves*

I can't wait to see what happens next. This is SO what I think would happen if Firefly had continued... a love triangle to end all love triangles!

And I'll love you forever and ever too!

Rinny
Thursday, 27 October 2005 19:16
I'm not anonymous, but I'll love you if you post more!
Thursday, 27 October 2005 20:25
Love how in tune Kaylee is with the ship and was amused how both Jayne and Simon could see something was wrong and were concerned. That little look Simon gave Jayne when the big man said he was in his way was telling. I like to think it's made Simon focus a bit more on Kaylee. Hopefully that gorram distance is starting to close. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 28 October 2005 09:20
"He had pretty eyes for a man; hazel, see-sawing between soft greens and browns. Spring time colors."
Sorry to be nit-picky, but Jayne's eyes are blue.
Friday, 28 October 2005 13:07
I've been waiting for part 3. And really enjoyed it, how's it going to end?
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 31 October 2005 03:31
Can't wait for the next installment. Wonderful so far!
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 03 November 2005 19:46
I love how Jayne notices everything about Kaylee and that's making Simon notice her too.

You've set this up well. I can't wait to see the next part!
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 04 November 2005 05:03
LOVE LOVE LOVE LanceConstableLogan is the boss of me!!!!!!!

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