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Our Co-Pilot Tam, Part 2

Saturday, October 22, 2005

Despite River's warning, Mal goes ahead with the mission. River shows both her best and worst, outfoxing some Feds but also being the extremely awkward 17-year-old we all know and love.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3059    RATING: 9.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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“Are you sure about this, Mal?” Zoe asked Mal.

Mal adjusted his wide-brimmed hat. “Even on the Inner Worlds, they've got to get vegetables to market. And I doubt the fine alliance federals are paid so badly they need to shake down citizens for onions.”

“I suppose you're right,” she said. “Although we all look ridiculous in these beat-up clothes.”

“You saw the fellow we bought these onions off. Did he look any better?” Mal asked. “Now shh, we're getting to the Eavesdown Docks now, that's where they'll be waiting for us.”

Zoe lapsed into silence, fixing her veil and glancing at the back of the truck, where Jayne pretended to doze on top of the bags onions, beneath which were their main armaments. Sure enough, the first patrol of federals just waved them past. The second insisted on opening a few bags, but gave it up quickly and moved away, holding their noses. “Like they never smelled dirt before,” Mal muttered.

“We do stink,” drawled Jayne from the back. “I thought that was part of the plan.”

“Alright,” said Mal, steering the truck into an alley. “Here's the back of Badger's. We go in, find out what he wants, then truck back on out the other side of town, where Serenity will come pick us up.”

“I've been meaning to ask, Mal,” Zoe said. “Should we be looking for another pilot, or have you decided to trust our lives to River?”

“Do you have any complaints so far?” Mal replied.

“She did fine today,” Jayne pitched in, “But you never know when she's going to see something and freak out, and that day will be a da-shiong bao-jah-shr duh la doo-tze.”

“Look,” Mal whispered, looking around as he parked the truck. “She's a member of my crew, just like the rest of you, and I decide who does what.”

“Well, not quite like the rest of us,” Zoe shot back. “For one thing--”

“And if you think that's why I let her fly Serenity, you didn't learn much about me in the last 11 years. I would not risk my ship and my crew for something like that.”

“Oh, come out and say it, Mal,” Zoe said. “Beca

Comments
Saturday, 22 October 2005 22:02
*Ai ya*, methinks Mal has his hands full but going back to the beginning seems a good way for them to get on track with each other. And River turning Serenity into a phantom Reaver ship was inspired! Loved it! Ali D :~)
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Saturday, 22 October 2005 23:43
i like! except for “Gorram it, Mal, I'm the closest thing you've got to a best friend. I'm not talking as a member of your crew—I'm telling you, you're blinding yourself.” from Zoe... out of character for her. Of couse, w/ wash corpsified it could be the newer her...
Saturday, 22 October 2005 23:51
Implied Jayne on River, NOW That's just down right unsettlin' AND near Mal on River! This is one crazy story! I'm not sure wether to like it or be creeped out! You have made one interesting story and I'd like to see where it's going from here.
Sunday, 23 October 2005 01:17
Thanks for the comments!

Jossisagod: Where did I imply Jayne/River? I didn't mean to. If you mean her singing the Jaynestown song, that has a completely different meaning (i.e, she no longer suspects Jayne of having it in for her and Simon).

Anonymous: You don't think Zoe'd speak frankly to Mal if she thought he was doing wrong? I've never seen her as one to hold her tongue when things got bad. (Also, this is the first time someone's coming between her and Mal--In the series, I think, she takes their war-buddies bond for granted).

Amdobell: Getting on track will be...tricky. Remember: She's 17, has had her amygdala stripped, and is socially awkward while at her sanest. She may not be doing what she's doing for the reasons she thinks she is.
Sunday, 23 October 2005 02:25
OOPS, I retract my previous statement. I guess my brain was in the wrong place to read this story. I guess I'll just have to keep reading to see what actually happens. It was a good story even for someone who's brain was apparently missing during the first read-through. I would like to read the next chapter if there is one.
Sunday, 23 October 2005 14:16
“They arrived just before you did. I had no choice.”

star wars anyone?

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Tuesday, 25 October 2005 21:25
Now thats what im talkin about! Was waiting for that, though it didnt last long. I loved the imagery. I could see it all play out in my head.

I love the way the story is headed. I hope you keep going with this, But can i make a suggestion? I would like to see mal get into somthing very very bad and river saves him at the last second and kicks some arse! lol

Very nice, Please keep going.
Saturday, 12 November 2005 09:20
Mmmmmmmmm! This does it for me! Keep going.

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