Blue Sun Room FICTION - ROMANCE

Our Co-Pilot Tam, Part 1

Friday, October 21, 2005

River, reading Mal's mind, learns that he's attracted to her and seduces him. All hell breaks loose. (All hell breaking loose is the important part--the romance so far is behind ellipses)

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 4723    RATING: 8.0 (PG)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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A ship soared on through the night of space, the broad blue expanse of a planet beneath it. It was neither a large ship nor a small one, a transport of a model that had recently ceased production, but kept in fine condition, except for the large number of dings and scrapes on the hull, and the faint vestiges of red paint streaking the sides. An observer might at first glance think it one of the many small freighters that plyed the spaceways, until he realized that it was approaching Persephone from the far side, with almost a whole planet between it and the spaceport. If the observer also saw the Alliance dreadnought Magellan in high orbit above the spaceport, he would become aware that the ship he was viewing was a smuggler, willing to go the long way to avoid the Alliance. Even—especially--after the Miranda Tapes had aired, the Alliance was a force to be reckoned with.

On the bridge of the ship, a lone figure stood, gazing up at the stars. The figure was female, of middle height, with long wavy black hair, a few strands of which she twirled around one finger. Her face was pale, not only with the reflected planetlight, with dark eyes and full lips held in a distracted grimace. She wore, incongruously, a long, dark red dress, cut just below her neck, embroidered with intricate patterns running down the front. The figure spoke as the door to the bridge opened. “Captain,” she said, not turning around.

“River,” Mal said as he stepped through the door. “How are we doing?”

“Well,” she said distractedly. “There doesn't seem to be anything wrong on the surface. We should land on schedule, even with the detour through the upper atmosphere.”

“Good, good,” Mal replied, stepping around the pilot's chair to stand beside her.

As he did, River added “I'm doing well myself, too. Looking at the stars helps...They're peaceful, they don't change. And...sometimes I think Shepherd Book is looking back at me.” She paused. “I know you think that's just go taso de superstition, but it does help.”

“I often

Comments
Friday, 21 October 2005 05:27
I love the action in this one. Fun's a hoppin'. Nice beginning and great descriptions of details like River's stance and the red dress. Dead-on. Write more please!
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 21 October 2005 10:59
off to a great gorram start! wonderful action and you really have the character voices down pat. Poor Mal getting it from all sides *sigh* he just can't catch a break LOL, lucky for him River's there to protect him and make it all better...as for the Mal/River pairing...Yes, I'm hoping more authors chose to write about this ship!!!! makes much more sense to me then Rayne (not that Rayne is bad, I just don't see the spark.) will be very interesting to see how Mal/River, two such dark, complex, and damaged characters are going to relate to each other and the crew. Not to mention crew reaction to this new dynamic ( hoping for much angsty goodness ahead). looking forward to more. angie b
Friday, 21 October 2005 16:39
"Captain, Simon, don't break each other." perfect jayne!!!

lovin' this story. don't strike me as 'xactly credible, but that kinda adds to the appeal
Friday, 21 October 2005 16:47
I found it pretty funny that Inara had the gall to get so upset with Mal about kissing River no matter which one of them started it. She has been jerking him around since day one but doesn't hesitate to get both him and his crew in the hottest deepest water then still rant and rail at him. Yes, there is sexual tension between them but being honest about it would be a breath of fresh air which is what River is. I like that and the Mal/River dynamic works in the same way two broken halves can make a whole. And Simon's reaction is so gorram believable. He is over protective to the point of obssession. I think the only one who'll untangle the knot will be River, especially with the crew not listening to the Captain. The feds waiting for them makes me think Badger has set them up, if he has I hope River guts him. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
CUB
Friday, 21 October 2005 20:50
Nice pacing. Good sense of movement to the story. Makes you want to keep reading.
Tuesday, 25 October 2005 20:44
Good. Im looking forward to a heated love scene!!! LOL

"I'll knit!" - River

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