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Bel Canto

Friday, October 21, 2005

SERENITY SPOILERS - A few quiet moments with the crew.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 5424    RATING: 9.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Bel Canto

It was weeks before he pulled the guitar out.

Honestly, Mal hadn’t thought he ever would. The guitar had been a parting gift from Book when he left Serenity, and although Mal couldn’t fathom the friendship between a Shepherd and a Mercenary, he couldn’t dispute the strength of it. He just figured there was too much of Haven tied to the instrument for Jayne to ever play it the same.

Maybe that was why he hadn’t recognized the solitary, haunting melody that twisted through Serenity.

Bursting into the passenger lounge to investigate, he was almost sad when Jayne pressed his hand flat over the strings, silencing the music. Mal shifted his weight guiltily, his blue eyes drifting from Jayne to Kaylee, who sat beside him on the couch, curled up tight with her arms wrapped around her legs, and then to River, who had paused mid-step in her impromptu ballet.

Quirking an eyebrow at Jayne, he gestured back the way he’d come, “Didn’t mean to interrupt.”

“Oh, have a sit, Captain,” Kaylee gestured to an empty chair, “Jayne here was just playin’ for us.”

The bigger man shot her a disgruntled look, “Never said I was playin’ for nobody.”

She smiled at him and he melted like butter, his fingers moving back over the guitar to pluck out a few lonely chords.

“Listening to him sing,” River added, beginning her dance again, moving to silence.

“Now I sure as hell weren’t singing,” Jayne protested.

She moved to him, all lithe grace and little girl smile. “Bel canto. You sing inside,“ she passed her cool fingers across his furrowed brow before dancing away, out of his reach. “High notes. Can’t reach.”

Mal thought for a moment that Jayne would toss aside the guitar in favor of throttling River, but the big man stayed put. His calloused working-man’s hands slowly filling the room with that same ethereal song.

He lingered in the common, following River’s movements with rapt fascination. Her steps were disjointed, not quite in sync with the music and he wondered if she really was d

Comments
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 21 October 2005 01:02
wow. you have talent. easily one of the most insipiring works i've ever read.
Friday, 21 October 2005 01:11
Awwww, thanks! That's so sweet of you to say. You totally made my day!
CUB
Friday, 21 October 2005 02:15
Excellent. You have such a straightforward, from-the-heart writing style. No using catchphrases or throwaway Chinese curses for a crutch, and you don't need to when you get the atmosphere and the characters right like this. Easy to read, yet it's moving because it rings true.
Friday, 21 October 2005 05:33
What an image, sad and brave and true: Zoe- "Sitting in shadow at the top of the stairs, she inhaled a shaky breath and wiped her eyes. “I ain’t weak.” Browncoats needed a fic like this to help us and Zoe through the grief. Now if you would just write a tale 'round the time Wash taught the song to Jayne, wouldn't that be shiny?
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 21 October 2005 15:56
wow. thats all there is. wow.
Friday, 21 October 2005 16:17
i wanted to say something, but whatever it was, it would just have seemed fake and insincere next to this.
Saturday, 22 October 2005 06:04
wow. that just got incorporated into my vision of the 'verse. seriously, it's a sticker.
2X2
Saturday, 22 October 2005 19:17
That was very nice. Thank you for filling in a scene I really felt was missing from the film.
Friday, 04 November 2005 16:08
Beautiful little story... brought me to tears.
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 04 November 2005 21:05
Very, very good. I don't know if you are aware, but this story was reviewed favorably on the Fireflytalk podcast, which is why I came here to read it.

And it brought tears to my eyes too, but I ain't weak.
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 07 November 2005 20:50
Thank you. This piece was beutifully written. I came to find it through the Firefly Talk podcast as well, and am VERY glad that I did. Thank you, Rinny PJ!
NFWBLS
Tuesday, 08 November 2005 20:25
Really realy lovely. The voice of each character was just dead on. Thank you.
Friday, 18 November 2005 22:51
Heard about this one on the Firefly Talk podcast and had to come over and read it. I am surely glad I did! Everyone is amazingly true to character and this is such a hauntingly inspiring peice of fiction. Loved it from the first word to the very last.

~Luc~
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 25 November 2005 11:39
It was just my luck... i picked at random the letter 'B' on the list to show all the fanfics that begin witht he letter. and i found it...it was luck and i loved it. it was some much needed closure, thank you. this is much better then good its talented.
-OldSoul
Wednesday, 04 January 2006 04:32
absolutely lovely... every character and every relationship spot on... i love the image of river dancing to his thoughts, his "singing"... just gorgeous work... and the idea of jayne with his big calloused hands picking out beautiful delicate melodies and how they all seem to be pulled into the room by the music from all over the ship, like a cord connecting them all together... and then zoe sitting alone... *sigh*.... *perfect*...
Sunday, 08 January 2006 22:29
Katjen, Thank you! Your FB totally made my week!
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 21 January 2006 08:40
a beautifully written haunting story. i could hear the melody from here. and my heart goes out to zoe.
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 15 March 2006 17:59
I'm a newly turned Browncoat and this... this was perfection.

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