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Handling Things

Tuesday, October 11, 2005

MOVIE SPOILER (the big one), a single scene/mini-vignette after the climax

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 4220    RATING: 9.0 (PG)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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In all of mankind’s history, there have always been certain jobs for which few people volunteer. Jobs like this one -- vile, loathsome or upsetting, but vital to the maintenance of a civilized society. In times of war, this detail was sometimes called “Graves Registration.” Simon had called it “handling things.” That had been his offer to the Captain, just within Zoe’s earshot, to go back to Serenity and “handle things on the bridge“. The situation on the bridge was, of course, not a thing but a person. Or an erstwhile person, at the very least. Simon volunteered to police the body of their pilot and the first-mate’s husband, the man they knew as “Wash”.

As a doctor-in-training, his first patients had been cadavers, so he took no distress from handling and examining the dead. None of those cadavers had been known to him personally, though. None of them had sat across from him at the dinner table or bantered over a game of cards. That seemed to make a world a difference, though Simon dutifully suppressed any unseemly percolation of feelings.

It seemed almost disrespectful to fire up the clatterous saws-all in the echoing close confines of Serenity’s flight deck, but it was unavoidable. The pilot was pinned to his seat by the enormous spear of debris that had killed him. Even with the impalement cut, it was still difficult for Simon and a squeamish but reticent Jayne Cobb to negotiate the body from the chair to lay it on the rough wool blanket on the floor. The body. Simon knew that what was in his hands was only organic matter waiting to rot, but it was still Wash. No, it wasn’t, not anymore he reminded himself as he began to coax out the huge spike of wood that had transmuted a funny, warm human being into a cold, still corpse.

Simon shone his work light into the capacious wound. “It was quick,” he said in his sure doctor’s voice. Jayne, standing at the foot of the body like a preacher at a fresh grave, only nodded. That was the question everyone asked when they got Simon alone and Was

Comments
Tuesday, 11 October 2005 20:47
Author note: I was going for "moving" but I think it flatlined at "schmaltzy." I appreciate your honest comments.
Tuesday, 11 October 2005 21:46
Nah, not schmaltzy. This is dignified and understated and rings true. And it made me a little teary. Simon and Jayne seem spot on.

One comment - while Simon seems the man for the job, I was waiting for a reference, however small, to his own physical condition, which wasn't so shiny at the time.
Wednesday, 12 October 2005 00:23
While this was very good it felt off that the only ones paying their respects were Simon and Jayne. I would have expected the others to come visit the body, Zoe obviously doing so in her own time and without anyone else being present. It just makes the rest of the crew seem a little cold rather than simply upset at the loss of another friend. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Wednesday, 12 October 2005 00:42
i loved it.
Friday, 14 October 2005 08:19
why are you people doing this?!? *reaches for yet ANOTHER kleenex*
Thursday, 27 October 2005 02:30
*snatches the kleenex from bellona*
*sniffle*


I think this works. I think that the others would come and pay their respects to Wash, but not while he's laying on the floor with a gaping hole through him.
Sunday, 30 October 2005 01:39
Ulp! Rare beyond rare for a piece of writing to move me to tears, but gorramit, you did it. Gosh... darned good work.
Tuesday, 16 January 2007 20:40
Utterly moving.
SUSANAH
Tuesday, 27 February 2007 03:33
Powerful stuff. Very much in character.

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