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A Lonely Road

Friday, September 30, 2005

When things go south again, Jayne finds himsmelf an unlikely ally, Mal takes on a job he really doesn't want, a figure fromp the past is on Serenity's trail, and relationships start to form in the most odd and dangerous circumstances...

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 2626    RATING: 9.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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A lonely road

Rating: PG13 for now, will turn R in the future.

Disclaimer: I’m just doing this out of love for the show and that I’m not making any money from this fic.

Info: This fic takes place right after the series ends, so spoilers for the movie yet.

Warnings: slash. Not in this chapter but there will be in the upcoming chapters. But I’ll post a header in case some of you want to avoid it. Also lots of violence and probably some tragic deaths. I’m evil that way.

Pairings: J/R, M/S.

Archived: at browncoatsbe.proboards54.com, fanfiction.net and fireflyfans.net. If you want it, go ahead, just let me know so I can rejoice!

Feedback: will be printed and nuzzled to death!

Part 1: where the job doesn’t go smooth and Jayne gets some unexpected help

She looked at her hands. They didn’t look like hands at all. Her vision was hindered… the air seemed thick between her fingers, and between her eyes and her hands, as if she was under water.

“Water…” she mumbled softly, still concentrating on her hands. Her eyes drifted to her bare feet, watching her toes as she walked on water.

She smiled as she crouched down, carefully dipping her fingers in the cold liquid, one by one. The small drops clung to her hair and dress as she sprinkled the cold water all over her face.

The girl smiled a little comprehending smile. The water seemed to form a barrier between herself and the world. Translucent and serene… like being inside a dream, she thought.

“River, what are you doing?” a worried voice pierced its way into her brain. Male voice. She knew that voice…

“What’s goin’ on here, gorram it?” a gruff voice said, immediately followed by the sound of feet splashing on a wet floor. “Gos se,” Jayne muttered as he set foot on the soaked galley floor.

“River, sweetie, get up from there,” Simon said in an exasperated voice as he helped her get up from the floor. She shrugged him off and rolled her eyes.

“We got a leak!” Kaylee’s voice came shouting as she ran up the stairs to the galley and skidded into

Comments
Friday, 30 September 2005 18:43
Wow, wow, wow!!! That was outstanding! I swear, you've totally captured the complexities (and sometimes lack-there-of) with River and Jayne's characters. An amazingly insightful story!

And very well written on top of it. Outstanding! Looking forward to the next part!

Bravo!!!
Karen
Friday, 07 October 2005 19:42
Aww thanks,
glad you liked it! River and Jayne are such fun characters to write, haha!

I'm putting up the next chapter tomorrow. Chapter three just needs one last read and chapter four is almost done, so I'll make sure I update regularly :).
Tuesday, 08 November 2005 18:45
Sweet hun :) Looking forward to read more.

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