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Tumbling -- Act Three

Wednesday, June 7, 2006

Inara flirts with a stranger in a bar, and then things start to get weird. M/I and some S/K. Act three of three.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 2289    RATING: 9.0 (NC17)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Act Three

“You know,” Len said, getting onto his feet, “your urge to protect Inara is really quite endearing – something the back of my head can testify to. It warms the heart, and all that.” He began to head for the door, but Mal’s hand gripping his shoulder firmly stopped him dead in his tracks.

“How’s about you answer the question, son?”

Len glared daggers at Mal. “Fine,” he said, relenting. He shrugged off Mal’s hand and sat back down. “It’s nothing, really. I just have this thing where I like to bet on races and the likes –”

“Lemme guess. You’re on the dodge ‘cause you owe some unpleasant folk a lot of petty cash, and you figured a sister who is a bonafide Companion might offer to help you get rid of your debt.”

Len stared at his feet. Scratching his head awkwardly, he mumbled, “Basically, yes.” Suddenly Mal realized how young he looked – and probably still was. He had a big mouth, no doubt about that, but all in all he was just a kid in trouble. Len looked up and added quickly, “But I am real happy to see her. She’s turned into one hell of a woman...”

A smile tugged at Mal’s lips. “Can’t say’s I argue with that.”

A little more comfortable, Len’s eyebrows shot up and his eyes twinkled mischievously. “So... why aren’t you two together, exactly? I mean, all that tiptoeing around one another I just witnessed…” He shrugged casually. “She clearly likes you and you clearly like her. Have at it already!”

Mal closed his eyes and tried to chase away the images that Len’s words provoked. “It’s a mite more complicated than that.”

“Yeah, that’s what she says, too, but I always figure things are only complicated ‘cause people make them complicated.”

Mal sighed. He really hated it when people made a valid point. “It’d never be anything, with her bein’ so gorram perfect all the time, and me bein’ just my own self.” He shook his head. “I can’t see how anyone can be so perfect all the time. I bet she’s awful tired,” he said softly.

“My sister is not perfect, Captain Reynolds. She just hides h

Comments
Wednesday, 07 June 2006 18:25
River stealing the pancakes off Jayne's plate was a hoot!

Simon walking in all rumpled and Kaylee being so chipper. . . bwahahaah, about time she got her some of that cute swai doc! Now, how about a detailed short of what exactly happened in Kaylee's bunk.....? :)

Mal and Inara - well, its about time for them too.

Nicely done story.
Wednesday, 07 June 2006 19:04
Man, was there a lot of "bow-chic-a-bow-bow" in there. I think my favorite part was how Mal handed over the money in silence to Len. Says volumes about both of 'em. Cool how you broke it into acts. If you like stories done that way, like seeing how others (especially a BDH) see Inara, and have it topped of with a little story-in-a-story that's not for the kiddies, check out my fic <a href="http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=10369"here</a>.
Wednesday, 07 June 2006 20:02
Loved how you got Inara and Mal together and it was great that Len did not turn out to be a bad guy after all just too much the gambler. Very shiny, Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Thursday, 08 June 2006 02:36
Awww, that was the kind of ending that makes me feel all warm and happy. Thank you.

And I adored this:

[Wash chuckled. “Hell, I’m happily married and even I’d like to tap that.”


Everyone fell silent, except for Jayne who snorted loudly and mumbled something that sounded like ‘yeah I bet’. Zoe just closed her eyes and breathed out through her nose.]
Thursday, 08 June 2006 17:12
woo-hoo! Did they ever have it out...

What a lovely tale of Mal/Inara goodness. Thanks for sharing!

-mal4prez
Friday, 09 June 2006 07:19
Well now...this was might "Whoa" and "GUH" here, Tanisfan. Gotta love Mal and Inara agreeing to KISS (Keep It Simple, Stupid) *wink*

And Kaylee's treatment of Simon? Yep...Simon's gotta have moves that blow her mind, cuz normally it seems to take a little while for Kaylee to calm down and forgive Simon for his verbal transgressions;)

BEB
Friday, 09 June 2006 19:09
Meimei...
What can I say. I should bet more often. This was brilliant, and you did the 'I'd like to tap that' right :)
Beautifully written. Really should try and write more Mal/Inara :p
Maybe a sequel where the hot brother comes back? :p
Anyways, thanks for this!
Love,
CCke
Monday, 12 June 2006 20:59
Well, in all honesty, you ended up walking a fine line with Len (you came very close to having him be a Marty Stu type character.) However, he was redeemed simply because of the manner of his arrival.

The breakfast scene was hilarious and Wash's line... ROTFLMAO! That was a genius prompt if ever I heard one!

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