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TRAUMA MEDICINE: Chapter 22. Time to go.

Friday, August 26, 2005

Mal and Simon rescue Inara only to find themselves in danger of being caught by the Hands of Blue. Desperate times call for desperate measures, Mal realizes. Meanwhile Shepherd Book has a plan of his own.

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TRAUMA MEDICINE: Chapter 22

Time to go.

Yet more thanks to wedjateye whose beta-ing is nothing short of brilliant.

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The warm yellow glow from Serenity's tail swells and intensifies, shifting through gold and silver to shafts of blinding white light and then she's gone, hard-burning through the Black which slams shut behind her, obscuring her path.

The late Mrs Burgess' pilot stares dumbstruck out of the viewports, unable to believe any sane pilot would risk such a manoeuvre in a vessel of that type.

“Bring her round!” Saffron snaps at him. “Bring her round, you piece of crap! More thrust! They're getting away.”

Luckily for Saffron, this ship once belonged to Rance Burgess, a man with a passion for all things high tech. He drew up her specifications himself and spent a lot of money on having her specially crafted, making her one of the most advanced, responsive vessels in the 'verse. His widow told Saffron so not two days back.

The pilot's hesitation in complying with his new employer's order, earns him a touch of cold metal just below his left ear.

“I can fly this thing myself if I have to,” Saffron informs him in a honey sweet tone.

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“You know this is ruttin' crazy, don't ya?” Jayne grumbles. “Even if we do outrun 'em through the Black, soon as we land the Feds're gonna snatch us for sure.”

“Mmmm.” Kaylee's only half-listenin'. Gotta get this circuit back up. She tucks a handful of loosened screws into the pocket of her overalls an' holdin' the screwdriver between her teeth so she has both hands free to adjust the wirin', gestures to Jayne to pass the solderin' iron.

Summat mighty distractin' about the way she's bitin' on that tool. The mercenary gives hisself a shake an' hands the iron over.

“Don't know why we're botherin',” Jayne continues. “Ain't like she's crew. Hell, she ain't even sleepin ' with crew. Can't see the percentage in us puttin' our lives on the line for-”

Kaylee turns on him with a frown, hold

Comments
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 26 August 2005 17:48
Ow! I don't know who is breaking into more pieces - Serenity, Mal or me!!! There are times when I wish I had something very VERY heavy to hit Simon over the gorram head with. Poor River, kept trying to tell him but as always he misunderstands. I am hoping and praying you have a really shiny solution in hand otherwise there ain't no way there's enough Kleenex in the gorram 'verse to soak up all the rutting tears. Damn, you are a might fine writer and I have been loving this. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Friday, 26 August 2005 17:50
Gorrammit, this site must be run by the Alliance, that last bit of feedback was from me but my ident chip wouldn't recognise me. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 26 August 2005 21:11
It's been a loooong time Kispexi, and so worth the wait!

What a fabulous chapter, I'm relieved it isn't the end.

Can't wait for the final insrallment!
Thanks
Hazel
DOT
Saturday, 27 August 2005 06:51
My g-d, this was chapter was brilliant. So completely heartbreaking. Only one more chapter? No!

Still think it's the best Firefly fic ever.
Saturday, 27 August 2005 14:56
You blew-up the ship? Bi-sexuality I can handle, but blowing-up Serenity? That's just wrong.
Seriously, though, great series, and this chapter fit right in.
Saturday, 27 August 2005 15:33
Aaaaarrggghhh!!! You blew up Serenity? (And apparently Saffron, but that's okay)

Gotta love River and those insights of hers. Really felt for both Mal and Simon, and liked how you played the misunderstanding that comes from their differing styles of dealing with such matters.

Only one more chapter??? Ah... come on, renew them for another 'season' ;-)
Saturday, 27 August 2005 20:42
*sobs....*

*sobs some more....*

*admires little sob ocean... pretty!!*

*sobs*

Oh please *sobs* PLEASE keep this up! *sobs* I need *sobs* more!!!

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