Blue Sun Room FICTION - ROMANCE

Radiance ain't so radiant

Thursday, August 18, 2005

More Jaylee fluff- what the hell, it's fun.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3486    RATING: 9.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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It was a hot planet- set a little too close to the sun for Kaylee’s comfort and she had stripped her coveralls down to pool at her waist. The bright green tank top she wore underneath was cooler but she was still too hot. She gathered her hair up and twisted it around before groping in her pockets for something to keep it in place with. Her hand closed around a chopstick that for the life of her she couldn’t remember the origins of- but she didn’t care. She stuck it roughly through the bun and smiled at the relief the cool breeze on her neck provided.

Kaylee’s eyes flicked over to where Jayne was examining a part with a confused look on his face, like he was trying to determine what possible purpose it could serve. She watched him turn it over and shake it- as though that would tell him anything about what it did. With an amused shake of her head she walked over and gently took the part from him, “It’s a port exhaust manifold.” She explained setting it down on the table. “Not the right size for Serenity, though.”

“I knew that.” He said gruffly.

Kaylee laughed, “’Course ya, did. Maybe you should be the ship’s mechanic and I’ll be the muscle.” The suggestion was light- just a joke but as she said it Kaylee stopped laughing. She remembered Niska’s station and just recently Jubal Early. She looked down at the part, frowning as she picked at a flaw in the metal. As though she would ever be anything but the weakest link, she thought.

Jayne was watching her intently, though she didn’t see it. His voice roused her from her thoughts and when she looked back up at him his expression was his usual scowl, “You just want a bigger cut, s’all.”

That made her smile a little, “Who says I don’t get a bigger cut than you now?” She asked teasingly.

“What?!” His outrage had her laughing outright, as they moved on to the next parts stall. Mal had sent them out looking for a part Kaylee had warned him might need replacing soon, as well as some other necessaries. This world, called Radiance (though there was nothi

Comments
Thursday, 18 August 2005 22:30
Okay, you are so my new best friend!

I loved it. There's just something about Jayne and Kaylee that makes me so very, very happy.

And I just adored this line, "Kaylee could feel Jayne- solid like a sun-warmed wall at her back." The imagery and emotion in those words was so real!
RUBYMOSS
Friday, 19 August 2005 15:18
Yes, yes...all good. More protective Jayne-ness, if you please? This could be the start of a beautiful Jaylee serial...

Cheers
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PIXIEGRRL
Sunday, 21 August 2005 07:32
I love your Jayne, what with all the manly protectiveness and his obliviousness to why it meant something to Kaylee. Like he could have acted any other way. Hope to see more of this soon.

ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 23 August 2005 04:50
Would give a higher vote for more touchy-feelyness, but loved the tale, all the same. I too loved the sun-warmed wall bit, and this: "This was worse- a rage so great he wouldn’t let it go because even he wasn’t sure what it would lead to. Then it was gone, tucked away where she couldn’t see it anymore. " Lovely writing--painted word pictures just the way I like 'em. Now, if only those word pictures were more of the kama-sutra variety....Sigh. Well, ya can't have everything.
JELAINE
Friday, 26 August 2005 16:10
Do love the Jaylee. Look forward to more soon.
Wednesday, 31 August 2005 02:32
MMM. I love jaylee fluff. More is forthcoming I hope.
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 01 September 2005 06:28
I love Jaylee. I'm just now getting into the fanfiction for Firefly. I was crushed when the series was cancelled and rushed out to buy the DVD box set the day it came out.

I am a die-hard X-Men (Rogue/Wolverine)fan, but I've read EVERY fic written about them and all the other X-Men, comic, movie, and cartoon.

I decided to try Firefly and now you have me hooked. I am so glad that this was the first Firefly fic I've read. I have another fandom to enjoy!

Thank you!
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 19 September 2005 02:26
Excellent fic! Loved it!
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 29 September 2005 07:25
love this, can we see some more

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