Blue Sun Room FICTION - DRAMA

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Tuesday, June 28, 2005

!WARNING! !MOVIE SPOILERS! There are so many movie spoilers, in fact, that I cannot even tell you what this is about without spoiling you.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3998    RATING: 9.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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This fic contains HUGE SERENITY MOVIE SPOILERS . Do not read if you do not want to know.

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Author: Rawles {rawles [dot]marie [at]gmail [dot]com}

Type: Borderline Gen

Genre: Drama

Characters: All seven make appearances. God, that feels horrible to type.

Summary: Kaylee felt indescribably guilty.

Author’s Notes: I was supposed to be writing intelligent thoughts about all the many ways I loved and adored Serenity , this came out of my fingertips instead. I wanted to write Simon/Kaylee fluff...but, uhm, it didn't quite work out that way. If there are any inconsistencies regarding the final parts of the movie and the order in which things take place it can be blamed on the fact that I have only seen the movie once and I was sobbing uncontrollably for the last thirty-five minutes or so.

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Afterwards, Serenity was quiet.

Not utter silence, not literally. It had started that way, though. As Serenity sat there, dark and battered, and they tromped back onto her she looked so bad, so wrecked, that the man with the tractor ship asked Mal, incredulously, if he was sure he didn't want "that heap" towed to the nearest scrap belt instead of the docking station. The Captain had just looked at him murderously for a moment, and the man did not speak again.

That sort of silence, of a dead machine, didn't stay, and the sound of the engine turning was one of the first noises that chased it away. Kaylee worked for almost sixteen hours straight to restore main power. It was a labor of love, but also of necessity. Hard to live in a place with no power, and no one wanted to stay anywhere that was not Serenity. So, Kaylee toiled and everyone else who was able wandered about the corridors, took stock of damages, and tried to pick up the little pieces of their lives that had been tossed about in the crash and put them back where they belonged. The first time that the repairs necessitated Kaylee go into the

Comments
Tuesday, 28 June 2005 04:49
Pretty nice, though I wish you had made this into a series of chapters adding a lot more depth to it. But still I liked it. I am curious to see how the fanfic's are going to change after everyone has seen the movie.
Tuesday, 28 June 2005 12:29
Brilliant! You perfectly evoked the kind of stumbling emotional damage to be expected after the BDM. I was however very surprised you made no mention of Book or do you have another part planned? Very good and nicely put together. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Tuesday, 28 June 2005 15:30
Can't type, there is something in my eye, sniff. Shiny! It does deserve a whole series. You write damage so well. Perhaps other crew perspectives?
Tuesday, 28 June 2005 17:26
I have to go ahead and agree with the others. I would like to see this changed into a series, written from each characters perspective. Quite shiny though.
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Sunday, 17 July 2005 10:50
The mind does funny things sometimes. Drifting in and out of mine as I read this was the lone voice of whats-her-name, singing "Amazing Grace" at the end of _Heart of Gold_. Thank you. This is a wonderful piece.
Sunday, 28 August 2005 17:00
see, you made me cry again. boo hoo.
Sunday, 29 January 2006 02:39
Very nice, heartwrenching piece.

ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 12 April 2006 19:30
This was just wonderful, Iloved every word!!!
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 12 April 2006 19:34
That was me above- Leighkohl- too lazy to sign in!

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