Disclaimer – Everything either does belong to Joss or it should. I’m just borrowing his shiny ‘verse for a while.
The 21st Lancers belong to the British Army so I’m borrowing them too. I hope they don’t mind.
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‘All the computer files in the ‘Verse are no match for good first hand knowledge of the other sides personnel and that’s what we got from Wilkins. Just because an officer has a shiny file doesn’t mean they’ve got talent at soldiering it just means they’ve got talent at brownnosing.’
Lieutenant-Colonel Helen Fushida - Cortex Interview - 2530AD
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Fort Obsidian – Beyond the Outer Rim – 2521AD
‘We’re asking you to save lives’ van der Heijden declared. ‘You were the highest ranking Honest-to-God battlefield commander in the Alliance ground forces and not just some damn politician in uniform’ he went on. ‘You know who the other real officers were and I need to know that too.’
Book looked him in the eyes. ‘You’re asking me to help you write a death list’ he said coldly.
The Admiral sat back down on the single chair in Book’s cell and crossed his arms. ‘You know as well as I do that troops without proper leadership are far more likely to collapse under pressure’ he said. ‘If I can break their morale I won’t need to break their bodies and a list of the more dangerous senior officers to remove from the game on day one will heavily increase the number of garrisons who will surrender or bolt. I’d rather do that than have it require more drastic efforts to get rid of them’ he continued. ‘If I know who the political appointees are and who the genuine combat soldiers are I can decapitate the units that most need it and leave the incompetents where they are to make the wrong choices.’
‘You want me to betray my principles’ Book stated.
‘I was under the impression your loyalty to the Alliance had waned over the last few years’ van der Heijden responded. ‘Or is it your religious faith, not an unwillingness to commit treason perhaps?’ he asked.
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You can't take the sky from me
I don't mean to alarm anyone but...I think we are being followed.
diologe, action, plot, awesome dude.
Charlie-Mike Hotpoint, continue mission!
Is this being continued, haven't head from u in a while.
I managed to track down Hotpoint after a bit of googling and mailing back and forth and he promised that the story is not dead, only on hold. He says he should be continuing the story before the end of the year, maybe even in the next couple of weeks :-)
And...is it just me or does the Brimstone parallel the OICW concept that I heard was being toyed with in the U.S. Army a year or so ago?
Anyway, good stuff, all of it, please keep it coming. I sincerely hope Juul is right about a resumption of this storyline, because I am thoroughly hooked.
Highest and most sincere compliments to the author, who is very good in this humble (and apparently long-winded) reviewer's estimation.
Please, please, please keep this articulate gold coming! I beg you!
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