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Horse, Foot and Artillery (Part VIII)

Sunday, June 26, 2005

The Regiment begins to take form again and River makes a Death-List

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Disclaimer – Everything either does belong to Joss or it should. I’m just borrowing his shiny ‘verse for a while.

The 21st Lancers belong to the British Army so I’m borrowing them too. I hope they don’t mind.

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‘All the computer files in the ‘Verse are no match for good first hand knowledge of the other sides personnel and that’s what we got from Wilkins. Just because an officer has a shiny file doesn’t mean they’ve got talent at soldiering it just means they’ve got talent at brownnosing.’

Lieutenant-Colonel Helen Fushida - Cortex Interview - 2530AD

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Fort Obsidian – Beyond the Outer Rim – 2521AD

‘We’re asking you to save lives’ van der Heijden declared. ‘You were the highest ranking Honest-to-God battlefield commander in the Alliance ground forces and not just some damn politician in uniform’ he went on. ‘You know who the other real officers were and I need to know that too.’

Book looked him in the eyes. ‘You’re asking me to help you write a death list’ he said coldly.

The Admiral sat back down on the single chair in Book’s cell and crossed his arms. ‘You know as well as I do that troops without proper leadership are far more likely to collapse under pressure’ he said. ‘If I can break their morale I won’t need to break their bodies and a list of the more dangerous senior officers to remove from the game on day one will heavily increase the number of garrisons who will surrender or bolt. I’d rather do that than have it require more drastic efforts to get rid of them’ he continued. ‘If I know who the political appointees are and who the genuine combat soldiers are I can decapitate the units that most need it and leave the incompetents where they are to make the wrong choices.’

‘You want me to betray my principles’ Book stated.

‘I was under the impression your loyalty to the Alliance had waned over the last few years’ van der Heijden responded. ‘Or is it your religious faith, not an unwillingness to commit treason perhaps?’ he asked.

‘I

Comments
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 27 June 2005 12:22
Oh my good lord. Hotpoint you continue to amaze. Thank you for the quick updates. Love the interplay between the D or G crew and well. . .everyone else. Keep it up!

-Canton
Monday, 27 June 2005 18:29
This is gonna be one hell of a War! Come on you Browncoats! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 24 August 2005 15:06
Loved the whole series so far. Waiting for more. Give us more. I have to know how it all comes out.

I don't mean to alarm anyone but...I think we are being followed.
Wednesday, 05 October 2005 15:40
love the story hotpoint, i actually added one of Mal's quotes to the quote file i've been compling for on 8 years now.

diologe, action, plot, awesome dude.

Charlie-Mike Hotpoint, continue mission!
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 23 October 2005 16:01
Love the whole series, always check this for updates at least once a week.

Is this being continued, haven't head from u in a while.
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 30 October 2005 18:01
this story is truely epic in tale! please finish it!
Sunday, 06 November 2005 20:20
To everyone following this story:

I managed to track down Hotpoint after a bit of googling and mailing back and forth and he promised that the story is not dead, only on hold. He says he should be continuing the story before the end of the year, maybe even in the next couple of weeks :-)
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 13 November 2005 00:10
Great Story. Plowed through all of the sequence in a couple of days. Only thing I'd like to see Mal more in the centerfield. He seems to be taking a back seat and that aint Our Boy. Give him some troops and maybe some quotes at the chapter starts. He's the guy who can motivate his troops to do the impossible so I'd like to see him staring to mix (and lead) the other soldiers. His character has always been that he inspires loyalty and I can't see River leaving that out of her calculations. More please! :)
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 22 November 2005 11:40
Good stuff! I just recently cottoned onto this place (I'm not what you might call a "true Browncoat" but life isn't perfect) and I'm loving it. Especially the tactics and militaria. Please tell me you have more coming! I'm not above pleading on bended knee, you know.
And...is it just me or does the Brimstone parallel the OICW concept that I heard was being toyed with in the U.S. Army a year or so ago?
Anyway, good stuff, all of it, please keep it coming. I sincerely hope Juul is right about a resumption of this storyline, because I am thoroughly hooked.
Highest and most sincere compliments to the author, who is very good in this humble (and apparently long-winded) reviewer's estimation.
Please, please, please keep this articulate gold coming! I beg you!
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 15 December 2005 11:53
Keep it going.......
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 12 January 2006 01:45
One of the best series, hope it's not over.
Sunday, 15 January 2006 16:08
Lovely stuff, and I'm truly saddened that it hasn't been updated in so long. I just read the entire series, and my, you certainly have produced a lot of good material!
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 11 February 2006 02:38
No kidding, the whole thing rocks.... is this going to be finished in light of Serenity's revelations?

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