Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Horse, Foot and Artillery (Part XVII)

Sunday, March 19, 2006

After the initial Independent blitzkreig the Second War of Independence continues with the Alliance still reeling and the Browncoats starting to consolidate their position

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Disclaimer – Everything either does belong to Joss or it should. I’m just borrowing his shiny ‘verse for a while.

The 21st Lancers belong to the British Army so I’m borrowing them too. I hope they don’t mind.

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“The main foundations which all states must have, whether new, or old, or mixed, are good laws and good armies.”

The Prince – Nicolo Machiavelli

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Independent Transport INS Serenity – Landing – 2522AD

‘Everyone tooled up and ready?’ Mal asked trotting down the stairway onto the cargo deck. ‘Remember if we do enough of a convincing show of force we won’t get any trouble’ he said.

Hughes passed Mal a GR-21 which he slung on his back then looked around. ‘Jayne grab yourself another couple of grenades’ he ordered.

‘Thought I was intimidating enough already’ Jayne replied reaching for the crate of concussion grenades on the deck. He was already carrying half a dozen along with Vera, a large calibre handgun and a bowie knife.

Wash’s voice boomed over the intercom. ‘We’ve got a pair of Angels running a CAP over this area. They say if we start taking any Anti-Aircraft fire they’ll tag the thing with a missile. But so far we’re good.’

‘Never thought I’d get another chance’ Jayne said happily ‘must have at least another sixty thousand just waiting to be picked up.’

Zoe growled. ‘Jayne we’re here to occupy the place not to rob it’ she said coldly.

‘LZ in thirty seconds’ Wash declared over the intercom.

Serenity flew low over the town and landed just on the outskirts, the ramp lowering as she set down kicking up plenty of dirt with her variable geometry engines. Wash had deliberately made sure to get everyone’s attention by barely clearing the roofs of the taller structures.

Mal marched purposefully down the ramp flanked followed by the Rangers who spread out behind him forming a shallow V of troops following him as he stomped towards the town. Several locals looked up from their labours with more than a few jaws dropping.

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Comments
Sunday, 19 March 2006 17:15
Loved Simon's reaction to thinking that Jayne was going to be remembered as a hero all over again while he would just be remembered (if at all) as River's brother. I liked the symetry of them going back to Higgins Moon and letting the mudders know they were finally free - had a kind of poetry to it. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 19 March 2006 18:49
Doing Great Hotpoint the pace of the story continures to grip and the attention to detail is masterful.
Jack
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 19 March 2006 21:56
Well done. I have enjoyed your story from the beginning. Excellent work!
Monday, 20 March 2006 10:58
Great stuff again Hotpoint!
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 20 March 2006 17:32
Hotpoint, this is genius. Blending in elements of the BDM only makes this better. I especially loved the line: "Zoe growled. ‘Jayne we’re here to occupy the place not to rob it’ she said coldly." Just brilliant!!

More!!

- Soul

Monday, 20 March 2006 19:52
Nice touch, after all these chapters of resounding Independent successes, having the Operative confident that the Alliance will ultimately win.
Monday, 20 March 2006 20:24
I know it's been said by others, but this set of writings is what drove me from being a lurker to signing onto the site. You should consider having some of this professionally edited and published, if it is possible to do it without F*X having a cow.
REAVERMAN
Thursday, 23 March 2006 14:45
Excellent stuff, hotpoint! Its so hard to find decent hard SF on this site, and this is more than decent. Definitely one of the best stories here. Keep up the great work.

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