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Horse, Foot and Artillery (Part XX)

Sunday, June 18, 2006

The Independents lift for a return to the Valley

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 6562    RATING: 9.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Disclaimer – Everything either does belong to Joss or it should. I’m just borrowing his shiny ‘verse for a while.

The 21st Lancers belong to the British Army so I’m borrowing them too. I hope they don’t mind.

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“As he faltered the deadly spear of Aeneas flashed. His eyes had picked the spot and he threw from long range with all his weight behind the throw. Stones hurled by siege artillery never roar like this. The crash of the bursting thunderbolt is not so loud. Like a dark whirlwind it flew carrying death and destruction with it."

The Aeneid – Virgil 19BC

“Whatever happens we have got, the railgun, and they’ve not.”

Major Steven Hicks – Speech to the 1st Battalion 21st Lancers 2522AD

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Gallic Plains – Toulouse – 2522AD

Ships were still arriving even as final preparations for the armada to sail were made, dozens, hundreds even, circling overhead waiting permission to land. Mal hadn’t seen the like since the war, the last war he reminded himself as he drove his borrowed four-wheel drive between rows of transports.

They’d come from all over the rim. So many volunteers they couldn’t hope to properly arm more than half of them and the high command wasn’t going to waste manpower sending boys with shotguns against heavily armed Federals, so they’d sorted out the combat veterans and told the other new recruits they’d have to wait their turn and train in the meantime.

Compared with the sixteen brigades that had shipped to Hera in the last war this new force was considerably smaller, but then again the Alliance couldn’t put a fraction of the same number of men into the field to oppose them either. The Federals had been caught badly off-guard with their industrial base hamstrung by the EMP attacks on several core worlds and a large percentage of their available troops enforcing martial law. Thus it was that relatively the Independents were putting a stronger force into battle this time than they had when they’d lost the planet a decade

Comments
ENDYMION
Monday, 19 June 2006 11:51
Great to see an update, the excitement is building. Can't wait to see the Browncoats hand the Alliance their asses. Can't wait to see the suprises River has in store for them.
Tuesday, 27 June 2006 20:12
Man I wish you had your own tv series
Sunday, 09 July 2006 02:16
Something I've been wondering, 2 somethings actually... Where are 50 people sleeping on a Firefly?

And do the Excaliburs have the same built in tea kettle as the Challengers?

Either way, that's two pieces of hardware I look foward to seeing you put back into action. You sir are an artist.
Thursday, 10 August 2006 13:05
It just keeps getting better and better!

Whats River been up to I wonder?
Saturday, 30 September 2006 08:51
Hmmm been awhile since your last update hope you still plan to continue this.
GWG
Monday, 04 December 2006 22:58
One of the best series.
Any more for Christmass?
COBENDANE
Thursday, 05 July 2007 18:42
Just read through this lot - excellent work. One of the best fanfics I've read, let alone Firefly fancfics. In fact, it's better than a lot of books I've read, and believe me, that's a lot. I especially liked the interplay between Steven and Book, though I think I'm probably on the other side of that argument to you ;)
I realise it's been over a year since last update, but there's been an 8 month gap before. When the inspiration to continue this story hits you again, we'll be back to read it, but this story deserves to be finished especially as close to the end as it is.

You're a great writer, and I'll echo the people here that say this is good enough to publish (with some editing for spelling/grammar ;p).
Sunday, 18 November 2007 23:30
Ok, so it's been well better than a year. . .but I still check every month or so! Is there any chance Hotpoint will come back here and finish this story? It's my favorite fanfic of any genre, and the reason I started reading fics in the first place. Please Hotpoint, provide me some closure!
Monday, 08 June 2009 03:58
Whhhat? Three years Hotpoint? I'd be willing to take a bit of a hit on X-SGCOM and Compelled to get some closure on a story. Got to say, you write some DAMN shiny epics!
Thursday, 18 June 2009 05:02
3 years to the day. . .and still waiting. I still hopelessly check every week or so. :(
Thursday, 18 June 2009 05:04
Well 3 years to the day my time (Central Time -6)

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