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Along Came A Zhi Zhu

Saturday, June 25, 2005

Jayne unwittingly endangers the crew of Serenity when a careless action unleashes something from one of the cargo crates!

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ALONG CAME A ZHI ZHU

by BlueHandTwoByTwo (LarryL)

Chapter ONE

Serenity’s cargo hold was full. Row upon row of boxes and crates lined the deck from one wall to the other, some stacked nearly ten feet high. Different sizes, different shapes, each with their identi-tags softly glowing in the darkness: “glass”; “fragile”; “heavy”; “perishable”. It was moving day. Some wealthy land baron was relocating his estate from one outer rim moon to another and needed a cheap transport. Of course he could afford a more expensive moving company, he was quick to explain, but most of his money was either tied up in escrow for the new place or still in transfer between Universal Banks. That was his excuse anyway but Captain Malcolm Reynolds was no moron. He suspected it was because most -if not damn near all- of the man’s possessions were probably stolen. Didn’t want to go through proper channels because he’d have to itemize his cargo for insurance purposes with a legitimate moving company. Malcolm didn’t care. A job was a job. The money still spent the same. As a rule, he never asked what he was carrying when somebody contracted him for a job. This served several purposes: first, it created plausible deniability; the less he knew, the better. Especially if he ended up getting pinched by an Alliance ship. Secondly, it guaranteed anonymity for his customers. Everybody from the lowliest of prairie scoundrels to the highest of World Court Royalty could travel on his ship and shuttle their cargo without having the watchful eye of law or politics monitoring their every move. And lastly, he just didn’t give a rat’s ass. He’d learned a valuable lesson long ago: life was far less complicated when you kept your nose out of other people’s business.

Malcolm finished his hourly check on the cargo hold, marked a clipboard, and turned to head back to the bridge when a large, round globo-ball slammed into the railing next to his elbow and bounced back into the cargo hold behind him. He jumped, a string of Chinese curse

Comments
Saturday, 25 June 2005 22:33
Um ok, this is diffrent but i am very interasted to see where you going with this.
Sunday, 26 June 2005 12:33
Great story! I liked this alot. The characterisation is 100%. Loved the part where Jayne was playing ball and Mal's reactions. Also, the part w/ Wash and Mal was very cruel but funny! :D Curious to see if Inara will actually carry out her threat. The Captain seems to have his hands full at the moment. Looking forward to finding out how this story develops. Keep up the supershiny work!

- Cos.

Monday, 27 June 2005 17:27
A bit confusing but fun too. I'm wondering what in the nine hells slithered or crawled out of the box Jayne knocked open with that ball. Also, it is unusual for an angry Inara to let rip without at least some semblance of control and more of an explanation. The threat to have the *thief* bound by law for taking whatever the hell was in that box also seems pretty steep and out of character for our favourite Companion so it will be intersting to see what it is all about. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Tuesday, 28 June 2005 18:58
I like to be confused. This is a great start. I especially like the line, "Such was the inssurable curse of being the adult class clown." Hilarious!
Sunday, 21 August 2005 07:25
Wow. You did a great Inara. I hope that she's going to be ok with whatever she was infected with.

I love this line of Mal's : "but most of all, I really don’t like being called a thief, even though I am, but that’s beside the point." LOL

BTW, is this on fanfic.net?? Cause i want to add it favourites so i dont miss out on any chapters, unfortunatly we cant do that here.
Keep writing!!

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