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ALONG CAME A ZHI-ZHU -Chapt 8 (Finale)

Sunday, August 21, 2005

Mal and his crew come face to face with the Blue Hand Men in this exciting finale to "Along Came A Zhi-Zhu"!

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ALONG CAME A ZHI-ZHU -Chapter EIGHT (finale)

By BlueHandTwoByTwo (LarryL)

The Alliance cruiser, Dortmunder, loomed in Serenity’s port window as big as an asteroid; its steel and titanium exoskeleton growing larger and larger as the ship drew closer to the small Firefly. Its uppermost spires already rose up far beyond the point of being seen in their entirety.

“Well, if there was ever a picture for ‘bad news’, I’d say we’re looking at it,” Mal said, his arms crossed, as he and the others quietly stared out the window at the approaching ship.

“Do you think they’re still pissed at us for mooning them that one time?” Wash asked.

“I’d say that’s a safe bet,” Zoe nodded and walked over to where Wash was sitting and rested her hands on his shoulders.

“Can always do it again,” Wash shrugged.

“Why are we just sitting here? Shouldn’t we be getting the hell out of Dodge?” Jayne wanted to know.

Mal shook his head. “Engine room’s a wreck. Kaylee was in the middle of taking it apart when she got infected. We don’t have full power yet, so we’re just gonna sit here and buy ourselves a little bit of time. Kaylee, how are those booster belts coming along?” Mal asked the inboard com. “Are we ready to go yet?”

“Almost done, Cap’n,” she answered. “Gimme ten more minutes.”

“How about I give ya five? After that, I’m gonna start getting a little panicky.”

“I’ll do my best,” she replied over the speaker.

“Wash, I want you to start plotting some escape routes so we got options if we need ‘em in a hurry.”

“On it,” Wash nodded and typed at his keyboard. The screen changed to a star field and he began charting various courses through the surrounding stars.

“Anything I can do, Captain?” Zoe asked.

Mal nodded. “Why don’t you and Jayne go put an arsenal together? I don’t know how many’s coming but I don’t think they’ll be traveling light. We don’t want to be out-gunned.”

“I couldn’t agree more with you,” she said and left the bridge, Jayne following right behind her.

“Sim

Comments
Sunday, 21 August 2005 21:35
Quite a different tale from most. But a good one :) Well done!
BELLONA
Sunday, 21 August 2005 21:45
BRILLIANT!!!

sorry, but, erm, what happened to the pregnant zhi zhus?
Sunday, 21 August 2005 22:07
Well, that was without a doubt one of the best endings for a fanfic series I've ever read. You did good, kid.
Sunday, 21 August 2005 23:29
Good on ya.
Monday, 22 August 2005 14:55
Hee, I was hoping we'd get a response to the Jayne dress wearing. :)
Good job, I enjouyed it very much.
Tuesday, 23 August 2005 22:25
Very nicely wrapped up and I utterly loved it that River got to blow those blue handed creeps up and save not only Serenity but everyone on it. Very shiny, thanks for a great story! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
BELLONA
Thursday, 25 August 2005 19:57
i just read your comment on mine, i LOVED this... kinda got freaked when i thought i saw a thing in the corner... but other than that... LOVED IT!!!!
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 05 October 2005 20:51
Pretty good story you have here. I love suspense, hehe. Man, spiders can be a real pain, ya know? Gooo River!

Thanks for a good read!
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 28 February 2006 00:41
Whoa cool :) Keep writing

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