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TRAUMA MEDICINE: Chapter 20. Sometimes you need a doctor.

Friday, June 24, 2005

In the aftermath of Inara's departure, Mal's mood worsens. A couple of old enemies form an alliance, Wash receives some interesting news, Inara finds herself in trouble and Simon decides on a new course of treatment for both his patients.

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TRAUMA MEDICINE: Chapter 20

Sometimes you need a doctor

RATING – R

WARNING .... Mal and Simon flavoured SLASH , but not graphic. Not in this chapter. *g*

With thanks for scrupulous beta-ing to the wedjateye formerly known as wedjat .

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Zoe hooks a couple of grenades onto her belt. She ain't taking any chances and she's glad to see Jayne's of like mind. His belt is bristling with fierce-looking blades, he's got two large guns stuffed into his holsters and is cradling Vera against his chest.

“Ready?” Zoe asks.

“Hell, yeah!” he declares, spittin' on the deck-plating for emphasis an' ignorin' Zoe's Do-you-have-to? scowl. “If'n there's any Feds still waitin' for us, I ain't goin' down without a fight.”

Mal's boots ring out on the staircase as he comes hurryin' down to join the mercenary and his First Mate. He casts a mildly disapprovin' eye over them. “I ain't expectin' that much trouble.”

“Better safe than sorry, Sir,” Zoe points out and Mal grunts in resigned agreement.

Serenity's engine tone changes as the reverse thrust comes on and the landing gear extends. Mal stands taller, bracin' himself for whatever awaits them on New Melbourne.

“Touchdown in five, four ...” Wash advises over the comm.

Followed by the others, Mal climbs up onto the mule. The vehicle ain't much to look at after havin' been pressed into service on Niska's skyplex but at least Kaylee's got it workin' again. That girl's a ruttin' genius with machinery an' Mal's eager to have her back on his ship where she belongs. Least she wants to come back.

Not like some.

“Sir?”

Mal starts at the sound of Zoe's voice and realizes that the cargo bay door has already lowered. He turns the ignition and the mule rolls forward out onto the damp, green surface of a planet Mal's already decided he don't much like. Too much water an' that all-pervasive stink of fish. There's a few local folk to be seen – fishermen mostly, them an' fish

Comments
DOT
Saturday, 25 June 2005 11:41
AAAHHHH! You have no idea how much I love love love this story. It's the best M/S I've ever read and all your characters are so spot on. I can honestly say that I've read almost every Mal/Simon fic there is and I always find, with the exception of a few, the story is good but the sincerity and truth to character is compromised. You write so that I can *see* this happening between the real Mal and Simon. Can't wait for more!
Saturday, 25 June 2005 20:44
I agree with Dot! The BEST M/S I've read... EVER!!!! Your whole series is making me so very mixed up! (in a very good way!)
Here is some math!
Jayne and simon being friends=happy!
Inara+Atherton=gaspo!!!
Zoe pregnant=shock!!
You and your terrible cliffhangers=begging for more!!

I hate to say this, but you need a really good sex scene and soon or else I will explode... and it will be all your fault! BTB; I can totally feel the Kaylee/Jayne thing your settting up and it makes me giggle... they are so cute together!!!

Anyway! Keep up the excellanté work... (or else!) Because I've got all summer just to read your words and am planning on enjoying every minute of it!
Sunday, 26 June 2005 06:19
Just ruttin' amazing! (that was a double entendre ;-))

It's all progressing in such fascinating ways. The development with Inara for-real whoring, and then having Atherton show up... intriguing every which way. Jayne and Simon--their interplay was so very good. And Kaylee learing Simon is sly...I could see and hear her vividly. Exactly on target.

The way, toward the end, when Mal blows up at Zoe was really well done in her reaction--concern for him, that no one else questioned, all understood, was actually quite moving.

Then Simon and Mal at the end. What can I say? I never cared for slash because I never felt the character development and interactions were believably motivated. Well, gosh dang it! You've completely movtivated it, and kept them very much in character in the process. Bravo!
Monday, 27 June 2005 16:31
Absolutely adore this, every interaction was so beautifully in character it became a confection I never wanted to end and the Simon and Mal at the end was brilliant. I could so see that this would be the only way the two would get together with a strong Simon proving once and for all that he is every bit up to the challenge of making a relationship with Mal work. Simon has grown so much in your fic and all the angst and complexities of our stubborn Captain are bang on target. I also love the notion of Kaylee and Jayne growing closer. I'm hoping Simon can fix Mal and waiting with baited breath for the next astounding installment! Kudos and *xie xie ni*, very shiny - Ali D :~)
"You can't take the sky from me"
Thursday, 30 June 2005 09:13
I'm on tenterhooks (what IS a tenterhook, anyway?) between installments of this story!
I'm so happy that Simon's finally showing his strength... had a feeling he'd have to get into Doctor Mode to jump-start it a bit ;> Love how you stare unflinchingly into the dark places, makes the light that much more precious.

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