Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL
The shortest fanfic story ever
Wednesday, May 18, 2005
This is a tribute to Augusto Monteroso and an enormous boon to those who hate long, long fan fiction.
CATEGORY: FICTION TIMES READ: 4401 RATING: 9.0 (G) SERIES: FIREFLY
When Wash woke up, the dinosaur was still there.
Comments
Wednesday, 18 May 2005 13:39
That's awesome!!! The imagery you paint and what word choices!!!
Actually, I do like this quite a bit.
Actually, I do like this quite a bit.
Wednesday, 18 May 2005 14:47
Wow! How heart-wrenching!! I laughed, I cried! Please tell me you've got a sequal planned?
- Soul
- Soul
Wednesday, 18 May 2005 15:13
Cliff hanger endings are cruel.
At least I think that's a cliff hanger.
At least I think that's a cliff hanger.
Wednesday, 18 May 2005 17:31
Oh my God!! You've done it. Finally the great American Novel! Oh except I think you're a brit. Damn you limey bastards showing us up again;)
Wednesday, 18 May 2005 18:22
I've been wasting all this time on character exposition in my fanfics, and this guy comes along and makes a better one in less than 10 words? I may never write again ...
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 18 May 2005 19:04
I'd have streamlined it even more by ditching the comma:
The dinosaur was still there when Wash woke up.
The dinosaur was still there when Wash woke up.
Wednesday, 18 May 2005 19:50
Do you work for the Reader's Digest or something? Where's the drama and plot development without the comma?
Honestly, some people would have had Michelangelo do the Sistine Chapel in a weekend with two layers of Apricot White.
;)
Honestly, some people would have had Michelangelo do the Sistine Chapel in a weekend with two layers of Apricot White.
;)
Wednesday, 18 May 2005 20:09
I think it's great. When will it be published? Will you sign my copy?
Thursday, 19 May 2005 00:12
I just want to know if there is going to be a TV series again?
I hate when I find a really good show and it gets canceled. Like Firefly and Dead Last.
I would even say that (to me) Firefly is up there with M*A*S*H* and 3rd Rock. The writing is quick and witty.
=)
I hate when I find a really good show and it gets canceled. Like Firefly and Dead Last.
I would even say that (to me) Firefly is up there with M*A*S*H* and 3rd Rock. The writing is quick and witty.
=)
Thursday, 19 May 2005 12:16
my god, its perfect. the characterisation, the structure, great. shiny.
Thursday, 19 May 2005 15:23
OMG!! Brilliant... but I have so many questions... so many unresolved answers. Why was the dinosaur there in the first place? Why was Wash asleep? Did the dinosaur make him do it?! What was IT?!
Will you be at the next convention so I can badger you all day about your great secret sucess in your work?!
Will you be at the next convention so I can badger you all day about your great secret sucess in your work?!
Thursday, 19 May 2005 20:22
Love it. Actually read it yesterday, but it keeps popping back into my brain.
Keep the comma. It's just a sentence without it.
Keep the comma. It's just a sentence without it.
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 19 May 2005 22:06
What a twist right at the end there!!! LOVED IT! lol
Nice!
Nice!
Friday, 20 May 2005 05:18
Why not give it a ten?
What clarity of thought... Conciseness of vision...
Perfection of phrase...
Keep flyin'
What clarity of thought... Conciseness of vision...
Perfection of phrase...
Keep flyin'
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 23 May 2005 19:49
Holy Cobb!!
I'll have it printed and autographed! You're the surprise guest at the next Serenity con, right? The line of people asking for questions is going to be pretty impressive, I'm telling ya!
- petitrhino
I'll have it printed and autographed! You're the surprise guest at the next Serenity con, right? The line of people asking for questions is going to be pretty impressive, I'm telling ya!
- petitrhino
BELLONA
Monday, 15 August 2005 20:02
dear god, it's truly amazing... shakespeare himself couldn't have done better. I - I'm lost for words, the beauty, the intricacy. I never would have seen it coming. Never. Joss, I hope you're taking notes.
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 08 October 2005 06:19
That was like the Heavens just reached out and touched my soul.I won't leave this website until you write a sequel (like I ever actually leave this site:))
Wednesday, 09 November 2005 06:40
I'm just discovering this now. Classic! Too freaking funny!!!
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