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Vengeance: Ch. 3 - ...To Fallen Friends

Thursday, March 17, 2005

The collective crew finally faces their losses, while Kaylee tries to find a reason for her situation. Soul thinks about his past, and someone unexpected is waiting for them all...

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On Board Serenity

In the Black

Harvey Breisch walked slowly around the cargo bay, examining every piece of cargo and checking it off against the inventory sheet on the clipboard in his hand. Most people preferred to use computer pads for inventory, but Harvey didn’t really trust computers. He put much more faith in a simple pen-and-paper method. Besides, he was on Serenity now, not Destiny, and he had a strong desire to prove that he was a vital member of the crew.

After marking off the last item on the sheet, Harvey sighed and wiped an arm across his brow. The temperature on Destiny had always been cool and comfortable. Captain Reynolds seemed to like things a bit on the warm side, and the bit of fat around Harvey’s midsection served as insulation. He was a bit too pudgy for his like, but his arms under his black skin were pure muscle, the result of many years spent as Load Master to seven different ships. He could bench press with the best of them, and his plan was to prove that fact.

Setting down the clipboard, he walked over to where the small crowd was gathered around the single weight bench underneath the catwalk. He looked up to the right towards the door to shuttle two. With fifteen people on Serenity, living space had been cut a bit short, so Harvey had opted to be the one without a room. Instead, he stored all his belongings in Togan’s room, which was the empty room across from River and next to Simon. He slept on a cot in shuttle two, which he didn’t mind at all. The shuttle had its own environmental controls so he could lower the temperature to where he liked it.

As for the rest of Destiny’s former crew, Etris and Rian shared the empty crew quarters by the bridge, and Spooky and Gretta slept in the spare room across from Book. That room, of course, had been a storage room before, so Harvey had moved everything from that room into an empty set of lockers next to the weapon lockers. It had originally been suggested that someone stay in Kaylee’s room for the time being, but that

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Thursday, 17 March 2005 22:06
nice.... keep it coming please.

- Ski
Friday, 18 March 2005 01:54
Oh good gorram, that snivelling low-life Badger needs to be put down! Love it that Mal and Inara finally let their barriers down but I worry about Kaylee and can't wait to see what happens next. Very shiny, Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Friday, 18 March 2005 02:32
I have two comments.

1. I really want to punch the gorram hell out of Talos.

2. Mal and Inara - perfect.

Keep up the excellent work.
KAYLEE19
Friday, 18 March 2005 06:39
Another great chapter, I can't wait to see where you're going with this. The scene with Mal and Inara was fantastic. Keep up the great work.
Friday, 18 March 2005 14:44
Evil, evil stuff!..

Talos is some piece of work.. Poor Kaylee!

... And that double-crossing Badger!!!

Brilliant story! Keep up the supershiny work!

-Cos.
Friday, 18 March 2005 17:06
I love this series, it's the perfect continuation of the its predecessor. Your characterization is perfect. Thank you for resurecting Early, I can't wait to see what he does. I also want more info on this Soul dude, do we ever get to meet his family. Also the overall tenor of the piece was heart renching, very Les Mis.

Phaedra

P.S. On a personal Mal/Inara fan note, this is one of my favorite hook up scenes. It makes sense that they would have to both be drunk and extremely depressed to finally connect. It's both ironic and poignant that in the end Kaylee was the one to bring them together.
Friday, 18 March 2005 18:12
I'd have to agree with Pheadra on all points and add that I'm seeing some serious morning-after regret in Mal and Inara's future.

The Kaylee scene reminded me of "Empire Strikes Back"

Han: "They didn't even ask me any questions."

No one suffers in silence among this crew, do they?

Oh, and Harvey Breisch and I are kindred souls. I'm probably one of the last fountain pen/leather journal fanatics you're likely to meet.
Sunday, 20 March 2005 03:44
NICE!!! er..um.. I mean SHINY!!!(yeah that's it)
Tuesday, 22 March 2005 08:56
mal and inara- finally!! i just loved tha part- took my breath away. so glad their together. don't you dare do anything to jeopardize them now. can't anybody be happy in firefly verse?
oh, and poor kaylee!! i feel so sorry for her, she probably feels like edmond dantes in the count of monte cristo- not even knowing what has happened and what she has done to deserve this. heartbreaking.
i'm glad you still talk about the destiny crew, and haven't just forgot about how they feel about the loss of their crew.
altogether a great story, can't wait for more.

no power in the verse
xoxox-fredikayllow-xoxox
Wednesday, 23 March 2005 16:41
Early's back... And of course, how could I argue with my cameo?
Good story Soul, but I've gotta ask - will I reappear?
Sunday, 19 June 2005 09:17
I'm just wondering if Soul's Firefly Sidere happens to be our own venerable Serenity...

Keep flyin'

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