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Just Like Any Girl Would Be-pt 3

Friday, February 11, 2005

Kaylee is found and tended to.

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A moment of silence was had as the news set in about Kaylee before Wash spoke up, not really believing what he had just heard.

“Wait wait wait, will you kindly repeat that for me? Because I could have sworn that you just said that Kaylee is missing?”

“You heard that because that’s what I said.” The mood was somber, that is until Mal started yelling.

“Tian xiz shou you de ren dou gai si!”

“Mal…?” Inara never got a chance to finish her sentence, because she was cut off by Mal, who had begun to take action. Nobody messed with Kaylee, this was one of the unspoken rules aboard Serenity , and Mal was not about to let someone hurt his younger sister and mechanic.

“Alright, Wash you stay on board the ship and make sure no one comes aboard. Inara you look after River with Shepard, Simon, I want you to stay aboard as well and set up the infirmary in case any medical issues come up. Zoe and Jayne? You two are coming with me and we’re going to find her.” Despite the urge to go with the Captain, Simon knew that Mal was right. Besides, he wasn’t going to be that much help in the search anyway, so he might as well do what he did best, medicine. He just hoped that he didn’t need to do any work in there that night.

Once Jayne, Mal and Zoe were off the ship, the three decided to split up to cover more ground in a shorter period of time, and would communicate with each other via communicators. This was how Mal ended up talking to Bester of all people.

“Captain Reynolds!” Hearing his name, Mal spun around and groaned inwardly.

“Bester…if you don’t…”

“I didn’t know you guys would be here. I thought I saw Kaylee going off with some guy, but I figured ‘nah, they wouldn’t be here’ but look! You are here!” Mal had been about to go off to continue his search until he heard his former mechanic mention Kaylee.

“Which way did she go?”

“Uh, down that alley. Some guy was hasslin’ her, but I figured it was just some whore or somethin’. It was good seein’ you again.” Mal nodded distractedly before running off in the

Comments
Friday, 11 February 2005 12:23
So glad that creepy evil *wangba dan* Early got sent to *diyu* by Jayne. That's the problem with assuming that a man left to die will do the right thing and actually peg it, sometimes you just have to use the old fashioned way and make sure. Poor Kaylee but so lovely to see how everyone cares and is affected by what happened to her. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Friday, 11 February 2005 14:04
oh my god.
this is just so damn heartbreaking. you really are such a horrible, but great writer. nah just joking. anyway, i'm glad early's dead.
can't wait for the next chapter!!

no power in the verse!!!
xoxox-fredikayllow-xoxox
Friday, 11 February 2005 16:12
I agree with Ali, but this is sci-fi, so don't the bad guys always come back, especially when you think they are dead?

I loved this chapter. I can't wait to read the next! Looking forward to the Kaylee/Simon fluff!
Friday, 11 February 2005 17:41
Being a suspicious sort, I notice Bester was somewhere he really shouldn't have been...what's next for his sorry a$$, I wonder...
KAYLEE19
Friday, 11 February 2005 17:58
You are a horrible person!! I really liked this chapter, can't wait for the next one.
Saturday, 12 February 2005 00:42
You're not a horrible person, its just the nature of the verse. One request. I want to know how Early survived and why he targeted Kaylee when it would seem that River is the ultimate pay day goal. I can see the argument that she's the weak link in the chain (i.e. she's the most vulnerable person on board), but I always viewd him as being more cunning than that. While Early's definitely evil (but so gorram amusing in his own way), his curely always seemed to have a purpose. I guess I'm just confused and dying to see what comes next.

Phaedra
Sunday, 28 May 2006 05:03
'Nobody messed with Kaylee, this was one of the unspoken rules aboard Serenity.'

Damn straight!
Friday, 21 October 2011 19:09
Poor Kaylee! D: very well written though!

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