Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Just Like Any Girl Would Be

Sunday, February 6, 2005

Few days after the whole thing with Early. Things are basically back to normal, or so it appears on the surface. Not finished.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 2887    RATING: 9.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Life upon Serenity was once again back to usual. At first glance, no one could tell that a bounty hunter had somehow gotten aboard and threw everything that was normal into a state of chaos. But Mal knew that all was not well. While Wash, Zoe, Jayne and Book were unsure of what exactly had transpired and it's repercussions, the captain of Serenity had noticed secret glances, changes in habit and masks being put up to protect oneself. Inara had been shaken but assured him that she had been startled at the time but was now just fine. This left Mal to contemplate the state of his resident mechanic, doctor and crazy girl. River seemed to be doing just fine and was adjusting to whatever new medicines the older Tam sibling had given her. Despite being shot, Simon seemed to be recuperating just fine, although he kept shooting worried glances towards Kaylee, who was the most puzzling of his crew. During the day, she seemed to be fine, playing with River, messing around in the Engine Room and being the ray of sunshine that everyone knew her to be. But Mal knew better. He knew that Kaylee hadn't slept since Early had been aboard, and she didn't flirt with Simon anymore. She was more reserved than she normally was and this was worrying because, while she acted the same, she shirked away from physical contact, and Mal didn't know why, and when he didn't know what was going on with his crew, Mal was NOT a happy captain.

It was late when Mal had decided to turn in for the night, but that plan was quickly nixed when he heard a scream from Kaylee's room. Jumping out of bed, Mal climbed the ladder in his room with amazing proficiency and was down in Kaylee's room in a heart beat. When he got there, he saw the young mechanic thrashing and pleading with no one. Rushing over, and put his hands on her shoulders and tried to wake her up.

"Mei-mei! Wake up...it's me…Mal..." Instead of calming down, the sleeping Kaylee thrashed even more, trying to push Mal off of her, but he kept a steady grip on the gi

Comments
JAK
Sunday, 06 February 2005 05:52
Too many elipse dots. It made things confusing. Other than that, I liked it.
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 06 February 2005 16:02
Interested to see where this goes.
Sunday, 06 February 2005 16:42
Glad Kaylee has at least told the Captain. River is right that she cannot start to heal until she accepts what happened and what nearly did. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Sunday, 06 February 2005 17:44
River's right...men never listen. Hopefully River will be able to help Kaylee come to terms with everything.
Sunday, 06 February 2005 17:48
Forgot to say, I liked it a lot! I'd love to read more...SOON! =o)
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 06 February 2005 21:37
LOVED IT!! I really hope there is more to this story! Will Simon and Mal realize drugs aren't the kind of help Kaylee needs? Will Simon be the one that gives her the kind of help she does need? AHH!!! To much suspense!!! WRITE MORE SOON PLEASE!
Monday, 07 February 2005 18:47
Hmm...I like the direction this is going. We never did get to see how well Kaylee coped with everything that happened (or almost happened) with Early. Great start!

- Soul
Sunday, 28 May 2006 04:49
I'm eager to see where this goes.
Friday, 21 October 2011 04:37
Shiny!!! So very shiny!:D

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