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Pretty Boys

Monday, November 29, 2004

Jayne reflects on the crew. Just something I’ve had in my head for about forever. One-time fic from Jayne’s POV. If I had to date it, it would be pre-Ariel.

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Pretty Boys by SLynn

He knew from the moment he’d seen her that she liked pretty boys.

You know the ones. Always done up nice. Clean. Some of them look damn near delicate. Jayne had never understood it himself, why anyone would like them. Didn’t make sense.

Maybe that was because he’d never been one and he sometimes had a hard time relating to other people.

Mal and him got along alright. He paid the bills after all. Jayne liked his relationships easy like that. Mal was his boss and he did what he was told. Easy. Helped that as far as bosses go, Mal was fair. He hadn’t always worked for people like that before. Mal backed his crew 100% and asked the same in return. Jayne, despite initial misgivings, found that he could do that.

Zoe and him had gotten off to a rough start, but in time he’d learned to respect her. He’d never worked for a woman before, every job he’d ever taken before he’d either been number one or number two. Coming on board Serenity he realized quickly that wasn’t the case here. In time he’d begun to trust her and follow her lead as well, not that it had always been easy.

Where to start with Wash. For one, he knew Wash didn’t trust him. Maybe it was because Jayne’d never trusted him. Wash was different. Jayne liked people to be straight forward and Wash just wasn’t. He smiled and joked even when he didn’t mean it, and kept you at arms length until he was sure about you. And he’d never been sure about Jayne. And how Wash ever got Zoe to marry him was a mystery he’d never understand.

Inara he’d never given much thought too. Sure, he liked to annoy her. Ask her inappropriate questions about her job and such, but to him it really was all in fun. Jayne had never seen a real companion before and he could admit that she was impressive. Beautiful, but in an untouchable way. He liked Inara as much as he liked most people but she wasn’t the type of woman that he preferred.

Which leaves Kaylee. Kaylee he could relate too and understand. He hadn’t wanted to

Comments
Monday, 29 November 2004 16:47
This was really good. I think you got into Jayne's mind really well and explained his view on the world and the SERENITY crew. Would like to see how he thinks of Simon now that he's saved his life as well as not only know that he tried to sell him and River out but applied reverse psychology on him.
Monday, 29 November 2004 23:07
Very good and a well reasoned out view of how Jayne things of Serenity's crew. I particularly liked the fact that he could relate so easily to Kaylee because they came from similar worlds. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Tuesday, 30 November 2004 20:23
This was nice--Jayne's soft spot for Kaylee, and another reason he dislikes Simon.
KNIGHTSHADE
Sunday, 02 January 2005 03:58
Lovely. I liked Jayne musing (if you can call it that). You have his voice down and I can see him relating to Kaylee more than the others. It fits.
Sunday, 16 January 2005 23:40
I an sympathize with Jayne a little more now that I hear him musing about his world. Helluva feat. Impressed.
Monday, 19 September 2005 00:26
So... many, many months later. I was randomly cruising through fic, and I saw Jayne's name. Somehow, that always seems to hook me, ;). You did a great job getting into his head and explaining his feelings regarding Simon and Kaylee and it just tugs at the heart strings. I loved it and beg for more.
Friday, 24 August 2007 13:37
I haven't seen this idea of wash, and i really like it. I think you're right that Jayne would see him that way and know he wasn't just a funny guy, but not really comfy with everybody. I like that.

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