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Interference (Chapter 2: A Fool's Errand)

Tuesday, October 12, 2004

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Chapter 2: A Fool’s Errand

Mal and Zoe entered what looked like a cross between a tea house and a junk shop. Shelves full of kettles and cups and all kinds of junk, most of which Mal thought with a smile Kaylee’d be wild for.

A small bell rang them inside.

“Hello,” said a thin, balding man, half there size. “Interested in a purchase?”

“No thanks,” Mal said still looking about him thinking this had to be the oddest meeting place he’d been too yet. “We’re just looking.”

The man nodded once and began dusting the shelves behind him.

“Are you sure this it?” Zoe asked, saying exactly what Mal had been thinking.

“This is where the wave said.”

Zoe picked up a cup, imitation porcelain, shaped to resemble a lettuce leaf and raised an eyebrow at him.

“We need this job,” was all Mal said as he too began to look around.

“Miss,” the man said coming up to Zoe, “you look like you need a cozy.”

”Excuse me?” Zoe asked, somewhat taken back.

“A cozy,” he said again, smiling holding what looked like a knitted green and purple rag. “For your kettle at home. It’ll help you keep the tea warm for your husband.” He had indicated Mal at the end, causing the captain to smile and fight down a laugh.

“No,” she answered with as much good humor as she could, “I don’t have a kettle. Or a husband.”

“Oh,” the man said, “Oh. I see. Are you sure there isn’t anything I could do for either of you?”

”Well,” Mal said, the amusement gone from his face, “don’t suppose anyone was here earlier looking for us, where they?”

”And you are?”

“Malcolm Reynolds. Maybe they left a note or directions?”

“Captain Reynolds?” he asked and then smiled broadly, “Why didn’t you say so. I’m Edmund. You answered my wave two weeks back.”

”Your wave?” Mal said in disbelief.

“Yes, yes,” he continued, growing more excited, “Come into the back. We have lots to talk about.”

****

It wasn’t more then two hours before Mal and Zoe had returned and gathered everyone into the common area.

Edmund was a tr

Comments
Tuesday, 12 October 2004 13:10
I like it. . .now did I miss where/how Wash was injured? Could you let me know where I can read that fic? I like the premise and you have a great read on the characters. Looking forward to the next installments.

-Canton
Tuesday, 12 October 2004 14:46
Very good. I like how this is playing out and that was very insightful about the Captain considering Wash a friend and such and not being able to put it into words, it simply wasn't his way, said so much. I also liked it that in this story you give Wash a sense of loyalty and nobility rather than just playing him off as the clown who just so happens to be a ruttin' good pilot. Can't wait to see what happens next. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Tuesday, 12 October 2004 17:33
I have to agree with Amdobell, Very good with the whole captain not being able to put his emotions into words. But I think the best bit is Wash staring at the door after Zoe leaves. I can picture that, it's so something I think Wash would do. I also like the internal Wash dialogue without it being actually internal dialogue, it's very seemless.

Breda
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 13 October 2004 19:12
This is pretty good. Please continue soon.
Thursday, 14 October 2004 03:11
Oh my God, great fic, more, more, more.

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