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SCHIIISM: Coda

Sunday, November 28, 2004

This is the third and final part of The Schism series.
This story is slightly longer (but not much) than the previous two instalments. I’m not really a horror fan, but I’m drawn to telling these kinds of stories in the Firefly universe.
A huge ‘big up’ goes to Amdobell and SoulOfSerenity for supporting what was originally just a one off story. No sequels would have been considered without your kind comments guys. (I’ve had a lot of fun exploring this story arc.)

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 4053    RATING: 9.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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DISCLAIMER: The Firefly characters and locations featured in this work of fiction are the property of Joss Whedon, Mutant Enemy Inc and Twentieth Century Fox Film Corporation. I'm just borrowing them for a while. (No breach of copyright intended.)

WARNING: The following piece of fiction contains mature themes of graphic horror and violence that some Browncoats may find offensive.

PERSPECTIVE: Jayne & Zoe.

They had picked up trouble en route to Orpheus. Big trouble.

The kind that spreads like a rash and they couldn’t stop the itching.

An hour had passed since Mal had failed to contain the problem. He didn’t want to leave the ship and suffered the penalty for his dignity.

Now Jayne and Zoe were trapped behind a boiler, guns cocked towards the doorway.

“Get down!”

Jayne hit the deck as Zoe took aim at the engine room door. Sparks flew off the walls as she missed the shot. A low, angry growl receded along the corridor and into the connecting stairwell as her target fled towards the infirmary. Zoe cursed indistinctly in Mandarin then lowered her weapon.

“Was that ruttin’ necessary?!” Jayne grumbled.

Zoe slotted more rounds in her shotgun and snapped the chamber back into place. “Yes.” she replied.

Jayne scrambled to his feet, looking a mite disgruntled. “Jien tah duh guai!”

Zoe closed the door and looked through the glass onto the other side. “I think we’re safe for now.”

Jayne snorted, “You think?”

Zoe glared angrily at him “Would you like to check outside?”

Jayne frowned and muttered something under his breath.

“What the ruttin’ hell are we supposed to do now?” he asked.

Zoe slowly eased the door back open and aimed her gun out into the black. It was empty. “We take back the ship like Mal ordered.”

“I ain’t going back out there!” Jayne hissed.

Zoe raised an eyebrow “What’s the matter Jayne. Ji?”

Jayne glared at Zoe “I ain’t chicken!” he grumbled.

Zoe carefully stepped out, watching for movement in the shadows. She signalled to Jayne and they made their way along

Comments
Sunday, 28 November 2004 21:46
OOooh, creepifying and scarily good! Glad you are still writing and anxious to find out what's going to happen next. Well done and *xie xie ni*, Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Monday, 29 November 2004 00:34
What do you mean, third and final?!?!? You can't just leave the story there! And here I was thinking that I was the king of evil cliffhangers. Great story, but now I want more!
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 29 November 2004 05:00
Seriously, you can't leave it like this. We need resolution. First the delay of the film and now this. What do you want to spark a revolution?

Phaedra (a bad luck name)
Monday, 29 November 2004 06:13
Final? Ah, come on... this begs for more!
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 06 February 2005 21:38
Okay... the key word here is FINAL... fnal?? Final???

Well, anyway the fic was damn great!! You said horror wasn't your best shot, but damn I would like to knoe what is your best show because you did a wonderful job here.

Back to that FINAL thing... well, if it's an open end, it's a bloody good one.
Thursday, 15 September 2005 18:43
my hand is round my throat, my eyes are huge and my eyebrows are reaching for my hairline...

DUDE!!! YOU CANNOT LEAVE IT LIKE THIS!!!
IF YOU DO, I WILL FIND OUT WHERE YOU LIVE, HUNT YOU DOWN AND EVISCERATE YOU!!!

b
Thursday, 18 May 2006 16:59
Gorram spectacular writing Cosmic! You've got the gift, that's for sure.

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