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SHADOWS PUPPETS - ACT VII

Sunday, November 7, 2004

Mal's past and River's present seem to have more in common than first believed. NOTE: adult content.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 2700    RATING: 10.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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*Disclaimer: All hail Joss Whedon and Mutant Enemy. Simple non-profit fan fun. I own nothing (and have no money) please don’t sue.*

This was my first fanfic and I loved every second of writing it. I apologize for taking so long getting the last ACT posted, but I wanted to make it as close to a perfect ending as I could. I tried to leave some things to the imagination…some unanswered questions. Hope it fulfills the promise of the rest of the story.

NOTE: This section contains adult content.

SHADOWS PUPPETS - ACT VII

By Shayz

FADE IN:

INT. AMGINE - CORRIDOR - FLASHBACK

Jess emerges from a sliding door, stands military straight, head high, hands behind her back as the door closes behind her…cutting off a violent SCREAM.

Moving her eyes only, she scans the area. No one around.

Lightning quick her left fist lashes out and hits a glass panel on the left wall, smashing the panel and depressing the red ball/button inside.

An ALARM blares and RED EMERGENCY LIGHTS flash.

Jess looks down at her hand, her knuckles are bloody. No pain registers on her face. She stares at her fist, transfixed: (why did she do that?)

The cut knuckles ooze dark blood.

INT. SERENITY - INFIRMARY - BLOOD SLIDE

Red cells on the screen.

INT. SERENITY - INFIRMARY - SIMON

Pulling away. Simon’s eyes focus’ on the blood cells, maneuvering the computer to zoom in.

Behind him, River leans against the door, but doesn’t come inside.

RIVER: You’re in the middle.

SIMON (turns; startled): Too zai zi! River. Yes…I’m busy. Do you need something?

RIVER: Years before us…she came. Big sister.

SIMON: She’s not related to us.

RIVER: Not by blood. Circumstance. Family…like Kaylee and Wash.

SIMON (returns attention to screen): No.

River considers Simon for a beat, then:

RIVER: It’s hard for you.

Simon’s concern--and possible annoyance--is evident as he looks over his shoulder at her.

RIVER (cont.): Knowing they knew.

SIMON: Don’t believe her, River. Sh

Comments
Sunday, 07 November 2004 14:29
Boy, was that ever good. You did well mixing all those images in the flashbacks. A shame Jess is too much of a trouble-magnet for Mal&Co. Wonder if Simon will be mortified by his new carnal knowledge. Excellent ending to an excellent story.
Sunday, 07 November 2004 18:11
I absolutely adored this but wow, do I feel so sad for Mal. And Wash had it right about Zoe being jealous of anyone being closer to Mal that her. You do know of course that nothing would be cooler than a sequel? (Hint, hint) Many thanks for a great story, very unusual and very well told. *Xie xie ni*, this was shiny. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Sunday, 07 November 2004 20:44
Wow. Fine work. A satisfying ending (double-entendre intended *g*).

The conversation between Jess and River clear yet cryptic--nice combo. All really well done.
Saturday, 11 February 2006 20:30
A really really good series. I enjoyed it a lot, very well written.

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