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SHADOWS PUPPETS - Act. I

Thursday, June 10, 2004

MAL’S PAST AND RIVER’S PRESENT SEEM TO HAVE MORE IN COMMON THAN FIRST BELIEVED.

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SHADOWS PUPPETS

By Shayz

ACT I

FADE IN:

EXT. SERENITY/SHUTTLE - SPACE

Serenity’s “parked” with the cargo bay doors open in a straight line to the shuttle. Zoe, Mal and Jayne in EV suits, work around the shuttle with heavy cables attached inside Serenity’s cargo bay. They loop the cables around the shuttle so it can be towed inside. Zoe looks through cockpit window.

ZOE: Dark. And we got crystals. It’s been drifting for a while.

JAYNE: Waste of time, ain’t nothing gonna be of value inside this bitty thing but ice.

MAL: Wash-

INT. SERENITY – BRIDGE

Wash is at controls, monitoring.

WASH: Beacon pulse is fading. (pushes buttons; twists dials) Life supports gone. If someone’s in there, they ain’t got much time.

EXT. SERENITY/SHUTTLE - SPACE

Zoe, Mal and Jayne are on the far side of the shuttle, out of the way of the cables. They each have jets to propel them back inside (CG). Jayne finishes with his cable as Mal clasps his end. Zoe links the two cables together at the back of the shuttle.

JAYNE: If someone’s in there, I’m chargin’ a labor fee.

MAL: Secure.

JAYNE: Yeah. Me too.

ZOE: All set.

MAL: Kaylee?

INT. SERENITY’S CARGO BAY – CONTINUING

Kaylee’s also wearing a suit; she’s attached to footholds on the floor and a strap keeping her upright in the bay while she holds the cable controls.

KAYLEE: Standing by.

EXT. SERENITY/SHUTTLE – CONTINUING

All three take hands off the shuttle and cables.

ZOE: Clear.

JAYNE: Clear.

MAL: Clear. Kaylee, go.

INT. SERENITY CARGO BAY – CONTINUING

Kaylee pushes the retract button. The cables wind around two wheels, towing the shuttle into the cargo bay, cockpit first. Mal, Zoe and Jayne follow under their own propulsion and give the shuttle a “hand” guiding it through the doors. Once inside, the shuttle hovers above the floor.

Mal, Jayne and Zoe maneuver themselves ABOVE the shuttle and use their combined power to push it to the floor of Serenity.

Kaylee is bending as mu

Comments
Thursday, 10 June 2004 13:05
still great! can't wait to meet jess awake
Thursday, 10 June 2004 14:41
Hurray! A new Firefly episode! With authentic characters and a full measure of mystery. Now you need to post the rest, please!
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 10 June 2004 14:55
"Shiny" doesn't begin to cover it - this is awesome writing. Who knew there was a lost episode? *g* HurrySundown
Thursday, 10 June 2004 18:39
Wow, this is so rutting brilliant I love it! Hope there is lots more to come, gorrammit. Can't wait for the next shiny part. *Xiexie ni*, Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Thursday, 10 June 2004 23:49
Very, very good. Can't wait to see where you're going with this.

MAI
Friday, 11 June 2004 07:21
This is an excellent story. You have a great hold on all of the characters. I echo everyone elses comments ... this could absolutely be a missing episode.
Friday, 11 June 2004 22:01
Thanks so much for the amazing praise, it makes me feel all SHINY (esp. y'all thinking this is up to the caliber of the show!) I'm working on ACT II and should have it in a few days!

Keep flying!
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 23 June 2004 14:53
Excellent writing!

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