NUTLUCK

Monday, 08 July 2013 05:15

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I can't wait months....

EBFIDDLER

Monday, 08 July 2013 11:29

Sorry. Wish I could just pull it out of a hat and post tomorrow. At least I got them on the ground. I'll probably post a few more chapters of Light and Shadow in the interval while writing the next story in this series.

BYTEMITE

Monday, 08 July 2013 21:43

Love this. Foiled the plans of the bad guys (albeit unwittingly), all arrived safe after a harrowing near crash landing.

But safe for how long?

EBFIDDLER

Tuesday, 09 July 2013 02:56

Thanks. Safe landing, but how safe are they? We know that they just barely avoided being landed at a Blue Hands secret facility, but they don't know this. I don't think the Blue Hands are going to give up all that easily.

AMDOBELL

Wednesday, 10 July 2013 23:47

Oooh, very exciting amid the worrying about whether those *tamade hundan* hijacking Serenity would win the day. I know, day's not over yet, but a girl can hope! Great writing, Ebfiddler! Ali D :~)
"You can't take the sky from me!"

EBFIDDLER

Thursday, 11 July 2013 03:25

:-) I was hoping the flying scenes would be exciting. The Blue Hands' immediate plans are foiled, but let's not forget that Space Traffic Control is not too happy about this incident, either. Thanks again for your comments, y'all.

ZOESMOM

Saturday, 20 July 2013 21:48

Whew! Now I can exhale, what a landing! I loved that line "I’d advise pleading technical incompetence if I were you...they’ll believe you." LOL.

ZOESMOM

Tuesday, 23 July 2013 22:37

Whew! Now I can exhale, what a landing! I loved that line "I’d advise pleading technical incompetence if I were you...they’ll believe you." LOL.

JANE0904

Sunday, 28 July 2013 16:54

Wash would be proud of him! Very exciting - well done!

EBFIDDLER

Tuesday, 20 August 2013 23:17

Thanks, ZM and Jane! Glad you enjoyed the wild ride and landing.
Good news -- I've made some progress on the next story, and it's helping me figure out the re-write on the ending for this one. There will be one or maybe two more chapters to this one, I think. When I get back from vacation I will try to get it in shape for posting.