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ENDS WITH A HORSE (12) Part (20)

Thursday, September 12, 2013

“Vaccinations?” Jayne asked, with a stupid expression. “Fer chickens?”

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It was only when he opened up for the Feds that he realized that the emergency berth he’d been directed to land at was located within an impound lot. At the time of landing, he’d just been relieved that he’d brought the ship down in one piece, and he hadn’t been paying the least bit of attention to that detail. Now he saw that Serenity was isolated from all other spacecraft. The berth was surrounded by the p

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BYTEMITE
Thursday, 12 September 2013 11:35
Nicely done Ip! But something tells me Mal is going to be uncomfortable and antsy no matter what happens or how nice their sleeping arrangements are.

Haha, Jayne's busted. Yay for chickens though, I bet Kaylee and River might take to them and I suspect the chickens would be much happier not having to be locked in Jayne's room with their own waste all the time.
Thursday, 12 September 2013 12:10
Cant wait for more! I'm hooked!
Friday, 13 September 2013 05:27
I just loved Ip coming up trumps with impressive accommodation for Mal and the others and just in the nick of time but oh, I did laugh. After Jayne having to say the chickens were his pets you then had Inspector Kwak board the ship. Maybe it should have been ducks. Can't wait for the next part, Ebfiddler! Ali D :~)
"You can't take the sky from me!"
Friday, 13 September 2013 11:36
Poor Mal still not understanding the appearance of high society and money changes how he gets treated.
Saturday, 14 September 2013 02:05
Bytemite, Mal knows he's not out of the woods, and no matter that he's going to be staying at a luxury apartment rather than a jail cell, he knows he's going to get grilled by the Feds, at the very least. He will continue to be anxious. As for the chickens, it's about time they saw something other than the inside of that box in Jayne's bunk!
Buckshot--Thanks! And there is more...just have to keep writing!
Ali, Yes indeedy, Inspector Kwak comes aboard as soon as the chickens vacate. Maybe ducks are next? ;-)
Nutluck--Yup.
ZOESMOM
Tuesday, 17 September 2013 22:00
Two cliches come to mind..."money talks", and "fake it 'til you make it".

Could Mal learn to love the Core, if they mistake him for somebody important? Might be an interesting thread to explore....
ZOESMOM
Friday, 20 September 2013 01:04
Two cliches come to mind..."money talks", and "fake it 'til you make it".

Could Mal learn to love the Core, if they mistake him for somebody important? Might be an interesting thread to explore....
MCLAUGJA
Monday, 31 March 2014 05:51
Just found this yesterday, and I already caught up to the end. Very Shiny.
Hope there's more.

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