EBFIDDLER

Friday, 03 May 2013 02:29

Posted a day early, as I'll be traveling tomorrow. Hope you enjoy it.

NUTLUCK

Friday, 03 May 2013 13:56

Very cool but now you MUST in a future story revel where the money came from.

BYTEMITE

Friday, 03 May 2013 22:44

> The two young date-deprived single men considered this possibility for a moment—a man who committed himself to one partner, and stuck to his vows no matter the temptation—before dismissing it out of hand. They shook their heads in synchrony over this unlikely scenario. “Nah.”

Yep. Although if they want to be agents, they're going to show a tiny bit more willpower. Then again, I wonder i these two are accidentally going to Know Too Much.

Aw, Inara and Zoe and reconciliations. :)

AMDOBELL

Saturday, 04 May 2013 00:21

I really enjoyed the dialogue between Zoe and Inara, it did Inara good to learn a bit more about what Mal and Zoe had gone through as a result of the war and its' aftermath. Did you name Boromiro after Boromir the Bold in The Lord of the Rings? The name just seems a mite too close for coincidence. Ali D :~)
"You can't take the sky from me!"

EBFIDDLER

Tuesday, 07 May 2013 04:05

Nutluck, I know where the money came from; maybe I'll reveal it in another story. Bytemite, there's a reason these two guys didn't get their Blue Hand applications accepted right off the bat. Ali, I gave Boromiro his name after being reminded of a number of Spanish names whose origin is clearly from somewhere else -- e.g. "Vladimiro" and "Demeterio." I would hope LOTR is still being read in 500 years!
Thanks for reading and commenting.

SARATAI

Sunday, 02 February 2014 06:50

Good interplay between Zoe and Mal and Inara. Enjoyed the voices; you got them well.