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ENDS WITH A HORSE (12) Part (10)

Thursday, April 25, 2013

Imagination and animal husbandry

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ENDS WITH A HORSE (12)

Part (10)

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Imagination and animal husbandry

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“He does that often, you know,” River offered conversationally, glancing over her shoulder in the direction of Mal’s retreating footsteps.

Zoe, who remained seated in the pilot’s seat, shot River a look. “What? Runs out on his watch?”

“No. Talks to Wash.”

Zoe made no reply, but sat rigid and

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BYTEMITE
Thursday, 25 April 2013 14:45
The peach story is one of my favourite war time stories I've heard someone come up with. Also a good look at the PTSD.

And Jayne. Practicing chicken husbandry. :)
Friday, 26 April 2013 00:04
I particularly loved this part, Ebfiddler. River explaining how and why Mal talks to Wash and Book. Zoe crying silent tears for Wash then all the memories of Mal in the war and how they both came out with PTSD, but Mal taking it worse because of his too vivid imagination. Any minute now I am expecting Jayne to cluck! Very shiny, Ali D :-)
"You can't take the sky from me!"
Friday, 26 April 2013 05:04
Good that Zoe and Inara know about Wash and Book now. Somehow I think the chicken is going to end up biting Jayne in the ass before this is all over. Likely metaphorically maybe literally very likely both.
EBFIDDLER
Tuesday, 30 April 2013 22:11
Had fun with the peach story, Bytemite. Ali, so glad that you appreciated the time spent with Zoe in this chapter. Nutluck, they always knew Mal is a little shen jing bing, but this adds to the specifics. I had a lot of fun writing Jayne's chicken subplot -- there's more to come.

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