Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL
ENDS WITH A HORSE (12) Part (08)
Tuesday, March 26, 2013
The perils of comparing your significant other to a cow. Also, be warned: there is sleeping in this chapter.
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BYTEMITE
Wednesday, 27 March 2013 14:32
Uh oh. It's so easy to get caught up in all the sweet in this chapter that I almost missed that vague whiff of maybe-foreshadowing.
Wednesday, 27 March 2013 17:07
Interesting take on Mals old life. Though something has had me thinking, if it started with a apple wouldn't the horse technically be the middle part and the it would end with... well whats about to hit the fan due to the foreshadowing?
Saturday, 30 March 2013 16:12
I loved Mal trying to apologise for maybehaps getting Inara pregnant and her reaction at being likened to a pregnant cow was hi-larious fun. Think Inara was wrong to put off telling him her own news though as the opportunity given for clearing the air for them both was ripe for it. I did like the harkening back to Mal's past but am worried about the other shoe falling and what that is going to mean. Great to have another chapter up, Ebfiddler. Very shiny! Ali D :-)
"You can't take the sky from me!"
"You can't take the sky from me!"
Saturday, 06 April 2013 21:19
Ali, Inara should have told him. He's ready to hear it. It's more that she's not ready to deal with it herself. Ali and Nutluck, I have quite a bit of backstory for Mal, and I enjoyed getting to write up part of it for this story. Bytemite is right, with all the sweet Mal/Inara fluff here it's a sure bet that something is going to happen. Sorry for the big long delay in response and next posting. I've been ill and then on a much-needed vacation.
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