Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL
ENDS WITH A HORSE (12) Part (05)
Friday, March 1, 2013
Mal waves the buyer, Simon does surgery, and Ip dissects Inara’s relationship with the Captain.
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Saturday, 02 March 2013 16:27
Well, you'll get the complete download from Ip in the course of this story. Much will be revealed. Thanks for comments.
BYTEMITE
Saturday, 02 March 2013 22:28
> Perhaps there really was nothing to worry about.
Mal. Self-Delusion doesn't suit you. You know better.
Nice little talk with Zoe and Simon. It's fun to explore the relationships of characters that Joss didn't really have a chance to give a whole lot of moments. And yeah, medical doctors have a kind of dark sense of humour, I guess you kind of have to.
Ip is in top self-aware form I see - always so much fun to see how you've created an original character with his own quirk that none of the other characters have, that fits and has his own kind of interaction with everyone else.
Mal. Self-Delusion doesn't suit you. You know better.
Nice little talk with Zoe and Simon. It's fun to explore the relationships of characters that Joss didn't really have a chance to give a whole lot of moments. And yeah, medical doctors have a kind of dark sense of humour, I guess you kind of have to.
Ip is in top self-aware form I see - always so much fun to see how you've created an original character with his own quirk that none of the other characters have, that fits and has his own kind of interaction with everyone else.
BYTEMITE
Saturday, 02 March 2013 22:31
Haha, and the way that conversation goes, all the jumps that are hard to follow. Comedy Gold.
BYTEMITE
Saturday, 02 March 2013 22:36
And the intriguing end line, no wonder nutluck wants to hear more.
Sunday, 03 March 2013 20:07
Cliffhanger curtain line. I thought it was a good place to end the chapter. (*Ducks and covers head*)
Mal occasionally deludes himself, and has hope that things will go well. They never do, do they? And what kind of plot would I have, if they did?
I liked writing a scene just for Simon and Zoe. Don't see that often enough, in my opinion.
I'm glad you enjoyed the comedy with the OC. I thought it was funny.
Mal occasionally deludes himself, and has hope that things will go well. They never do, do they? And what kind of plot would I have, if they did?
I liked writing a scene just for Simon and Zoe. Don't see that often enough, in my opinion.
I'm glad you enjoyed the comedy with the OC. I thought it was funny.
BYTEMITE
Monday, 04 March 2013 16:07
Mal used to be an optimist. Sometimes that side still surfaces in all the cynicism.
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