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ENDS WITH A HORSE (12) Part (01)

Sunday, January 27, 2013

What begins with an apple…ends with a horse.

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ENDS WITH A HORSE (12)

Part (01)

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Rating: My stories are typically PG to PG-13 to occasional R. You will not find detailed descriptions of blood, gore, and sex, but you will find situations appropriate for mature readers, innuendo, implicat

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BYTEMITE
Monday, 28 January 2013 02:54
Yay!

There's lots to like in this, of course. Zoe big-sistering to Mal's still-kinda-likes-Saffron-but-he's-NOT-wrong younger brother, River drawing on shakespeare, Inara getting the reference and finally beginning to unravel her own web of self-delusion, at which your entire readership will throw a parade in honour of the occasion.

And of course the most famous stage direction in theatre. Classy touch.

As I've said before, I think you've worked that problem section into something very functional. Your hard work shows, now for all the accolades.
Monday, 28 January 2013 16:40
And finally the penny seems to have dropped for Inara.
BYTEMITE
Monday, 28 January 2013 18:09
Penny dropped, heck. There's guys in clown costumes riding horses down the street, tossing pennies to onlookers and small children.
Monday, 28 January 2013 19:40
Well, Inara couldn't stay angry and misled forever. (Besides, the readers would probably gang up on me if I kept writing angry, unreasonable Inara! Virtual tomatoes might start flying my direction.) Stay tuned for Mal and Inara resolving some of their issues, and a certain amount of fluff. Although, it's Mal and Inara, so don't think you'll get an unlimited fluff-fest. Thanks for comments, Nutluck and Bytemite. I'm gonna sit here and watch the parade. Maybe I'll get a penny.
Monday, 28 January 2013 19:40
Well, Inara couldn't stay angry and misled forever. (Besides, the readers would probably gang up on me if I kept writing angry, unreasonable Inara! Virtual tomatoes might start flying my direction.) Stay tuned for Mal and Inara resolving some of their issues, and a certain amount of fluff. Although, it's Mal and Inara, so don't think you'll get an unlimited fluff-fest. Thanks for comments, Nutluck and Bytemite. I'm gonna sit here and watch the parade. Maybe I'll get a penny.
Tuesday, 29 January 2013 19:50
At last, Inara finally clues in to the fact that Mal and Zoe are NOT romatically involved and realises their actual closeness is that of family not lovers. Now to find the rest of Saffron's nasty little toys preferably before any of them bring even more bad luck down on them. I would also worry about who sent Saffron. Ali D :-)
"You can't take the sky from me!"
Tuesday, 05 February 2013 01:57
Ali, you are right to worry about who sent Saffron. Inara is finally making some progress, we'll see more. Thanks for your comments.
ZOESMOM
Friday, 26 July 2013 18:16
Jayne and his "obnoxious floozy"--LOL!

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