BYTEMITE

Saturday, 04 February 2012 19:02

@ Description: Boy, you aren't kidding.

You have me kinda worried about Ip, and Zoe, but also Zoe's baby. And jeez, the baby, you have us caring about characters you haven't even written yet.

ZOESMOM

Saturday, 04 February 2012 20:07

“耶稣 我的天 圣佛 Yēsū wǒ de tiān shèng Fó Vishnu 大地女神 dìqiú nǚshén Alhamdulillah ar-Rahman!” he exclaimed, directing a look of awe at Mal.

“No one’s ever called me that before,” Mal said drily.

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I'll have to remember that one. What a line!

ZZETTA13

Sunday, 05 February 2012 00:59

Holy Smokes eb!
Quite a bit of excitement going on in this chapter. River and Ip almost get caught, then actually do get corralled by some folk. Not Good! River has always been able to get out of tight situations, hope she can here (with Ip too, that is).

Now Zoe!!? Who are these knuckleheads shooting at our innocent crew members? Much more action will ensue, I’m sure of it. Hope Zoe is Ok, now you have me worried about the baby also….!

Great chapter as always…ZBP

NUTLUCK

Sunday, 05 February 2012 10:04

This could be bad for IP and River. I wonder who is shooting at Mal and Zoe it is such a long possible list...

PLATONIST

Sunday, 05 February 2012 19:15

Oh no, hope Zoe and the baby are okay, an unexpected twist, your action scenes are suspenseful and exciting, especially the one with River and Ip.

Post more.

EBFIDDLER

Tuesday, 07 February 2012 15:43

Thanks for your comments, everyone. It's certainly a cliffhanger! More action in the next chapter, coming soon.

AMDOBELL

Friday, 10 February 2012 16:52

Uh oh, I hope the baby is okay. I can't help feeling that the people shooting at Mal and Zoe have some connection to the timonium. As for Ip and River...lots of fingers crossed at this end! Great writing as ever. Ali D :~)
"You can't take the sky from me!"