Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL
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Saturday, 15 October 2011 15:28
Mal might be slow at times but eventually he seems to get River better than anyone else.
ZOESMOM
Saturday, 15 October 2011 17:32
"twelve months pregnant with a hippopotamus" <---- made me laugh!
Saturday, 15 October 2011 20:18
You're welcome, ebfiddler, though I did smile that as soon as Mal left him Simon got in trouble again! Loved this, especially Mal blurting out his that he was courting Inara and hoped to marry at some time, him blushing and missing the pleased look on Inara's face had me grinning fit to bust. I hope they don't get into too much trouble at that dump, they need all the help they can get. Also, I loved the part where the Captain reflects that Simon belongs on Serenity now. Ali D :~)
"You can't take the sky from me!"
Sunday, 16 October 2011 00:38
Personally I like Mal and Zoe reminiscing.

“That ship was a deathtrap.”

“You asked me if I paid money for her…on purpose.”

“I said you were robbed.”
Sunday, 16 October 2011 03:35
Somehow I think there's still more to River's comments.

Nice to see the crew socialize, and the junkyard. And the dog. :)
Sunday, 16 October 2011 21:37
Thanks for the comments!

Nutluck, River has been saying that since the beginning of Story #7, as soon as she heard that their destination was Beylix, and someone finally got it. Mal does get River better than anyone else. Simon has more history with her, but sometimes that stands in his way. ZoesMom--"12 months..." I have felt that way, myself. Ali D--Simon's troubles are only just beginning. Oh, so glad you liked the Mal and Inara scene--there will be consequences, in more than one way. Glad you liked the Captain's reflections on Simon...again, not mere idle thoughts. m52--it gave me great pleasure to quote Mal and Zoe from "Out of Gas". Bytemite--there's always more to River's comments than meets the eye, isn't there? When the crew of Serenity sits down to socialize, they don't just chit-chat, do they? I had fun writing the dog. I knew Mal would be a natural with the dog (Ali D already showed us that ;-) ) and it just seemed right that Simon wouldn't know how to react appropriately.
SINDIKS
Monday, 17 October 2011 17:45
I just want to say ,I'm a big fan of your's fictions,when I started read it I can't stop until 4am(my husband was willing to kill me) I can't wait until next chapter.
Tuesday, 18 October 2011 03:36
Sindiks, thank you for commenting. I'm so glad you're enjoying the stories, and very flattered that you couldn't stop reading. Please try to get some sleep! :-) Next part will be posted on schedule in a few days.

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