Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL
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Friday, 19 August 2011 19:26
Glee! Now hopefully the people being retained by immigration will be allowed to leave as well, though why do I expect there to be resistance?

I'd say I'd be looking forward to the expression on the prosecutors face when the people are freed and they all THANK Mal, but somehow I expect even more likely they're going to be vanished before their release.

And yet, hearing he's not going to be sentenced to 2,000 years in jail, Mal still gets gut punched over Inara seeing clients. On his behalf. Mal, you're an idiot.
Saturday, 20 August 2011 05:53
Very cool, nice wrap up to the trail. But now i want to know what next not to mention the rest of the interplay between the crew. Like how Mal will react to what Ip did, or Inara, or where they go next etc. Don't keep us waiting long.
Saturday, 20 August 2011 12:28
I was cheering all the way through this part! Hoo-gorram-ray, at last something is going Mal's way though when Badger was mentioned I groaned out loud. As for Mal being an idiot for his reaction to Inara seeing Clients when she was actually using her influence to help get him out of this fix Bytemite, he didn't know she was doing that and it would have been an emotional reaction and in keeping with how he feels about her. As for what will happen to those poor people now I do worry that the slavers have a mean spirited back up plan but hope I am wrong. Would be shiny for them to be free at last. Ali D :~)
"You can't take the sky from me!"
Saturday, 20 August 2011 15:42
Yay! Mal fought the law and won!

I too think Mal's reaction over Inara was an emotional one, he has a way of jumping to conclusions, especially with Inara, could take a long while to patch things up because Mal's not very forgiving. But, poor Inara, she’s going to get the cold shoulder at first and then his wrath…run and hide girl!

oh, the drama, good read
ZOESMOM
Sunday, 21 August 2011 16:15
Hey, I really liked the wrestling match metaphor!
Sunday, 21 August 2011 17:30
Thank you for comments, all.

I am also glad that Mal is not going to jail for 2000 years. Although that would only have happened if he'd had to serve all the sentences consecutively, instead of concurrently. Still...

What will happen to the ex-slaves who were detained? We'll find out in the next story.

Mal does not know that Inara saw the clients in order to work the system on his behalf. His reaction was gut emotion. When he stops to think about it, he will begin to realize what he owes her, but he still has no idea of the details, and what he imagines of those details hurts him. He hears "dinner dance with Judge Advocate"--and imagines Inara in bed with the guy. We know what really happened there, but he doesn't. Not yet.

We will get to find out about the rest of the crew, fall-out, and repercussions of this event in upcoming stories.

Tuesday, 23 August 2011 19:07
It's been 4 days, where's the next part? :)
Thursday, 01 September 2011 23:10
Oh, I know. I'm being affectionately insulting. He's still an idiot, though, or at least a fool in love. *Shake head*

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