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THE TRIAL (06) Part (02)

Thursday, August 11, 2011

Mal stands alone before the judge, while the others are planning and plotting and possibly scheming.

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Thursday, 11 August 2011 15:45
Very good chapter and getting really interesting, looking forward to the next part.
Thursday, 11 August 2011 16:58
I've always liked stories exploring the seedy side of what is allowed to go on in the verse.

I can't think of any case studies where an abolitionist helping free slaves was caught and charged for it. I know the South had some laws about it, I imagine it must have happened.

In any case, what I think is the most interesting is the look at the loopholes, and the way evidence (manufactured and circumstantial) and the odds are stacking against Mal.
Friday, 12 August 2011 22:24
Love that Harrow pretended not to know Mal, I'm not sure if it’s a lucky break or a bad omen, as Harrow knows Mal is a smuggler, who’s worked for the likes of Badger, and himself.

Good to see Mal and Inara are still in denial about how much the need each other, what they really need is their heads knocked together. Inara’s description of Mal’s selflessness and good deeds is heartwarming.

Post more:)
Saturday, 13 August 2011 14:26
I feel a mite relieved that Sir Warrick Harrow will be trying Mal's case but disturbed by how much the other side have arranged to make their lies stick. As for the notion of sending the poor people back to the planet they were enslaved on if Mal can't win his case that is terrible. I really hope Melissa and the others can pull more than a rabbit out of their collective hats! And what about the SAHT who were supposed to meet Mal when Serenity landed? Where in *diyu* did they disappear to or are they secretly in league with the very slavers they are supposed to oppose? Ali D :~)
"You can't take the sky from me!"
Monday, 15 August 2011 03:31
It's been like 3 days where's the next one? :)
Tuesday, 16 August 2011 02:15
Thank you very much for the comments.

Bytemite: This story had its origins in the following thought: What if, when Mal rescues the slaves, instead of getting a job-well-done pat on the back, what if he gets nailed for it? It struck me that the scenario was rather Jossian, so I constructed the stories to lead up to this outcome.

Platonist: Harrow recognized Mal immediately, but he has decided not to acknowledge that he knows him. I think

Ali D: The Society to Abolish Human Trafficking has not disappeared, but their activities are occurring off-screen, so. They are, in fact, footing the bill for Mal's defense. Melissa Draper is donating her time, and the SAHT is covering all costs. I didn't write this into the story, but, as the author, I know that this is what happened. ;-)

Nutluck: Working on getting the next part up. Back to regular internet access again!


Tuesday, 16 August 2011 03:00
oh god it's been 4 days.... my hands are starting to shake, I need the next chapter....

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