Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

BREAK OUT (05) Part (01)

Sunday, July 10, 2011

Serenity’s new supercargo has a secret.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 5250    RATING: 9.0 (PG)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Sunday, 10 July 2011 02:08
Very cool, I really liked this chapter. Keep up the good work.
Sunday, 10 July 2011 05:04
We got some fun and some excellent crew tension and drama.
Sunday, 10 July 2011 15:55
I liked this very much and it was good to get a clearer idea of exactly who Ip is. I am inclined to go with River's assessment but am not surprised his confession about Blue Sun was so unsettling. I wonder when he will find out that the Captain came from Shadow? And as for him blithely not noticing when he is saying something upsetting or treading on toes, that just made me smile. I know a few folk like that. Ali D :~)
"You can't take the sky from me!"
Sunday, 10 July 2011 21:32
Great chapter

Love Simon's and Kaylee's quarrel, and thank you for flirty Kaylee and jealous Simon, perfectly in character.

And Jayne, with “top 3 percent” quip, hilarious, interesting development with Ip's work.

Inara really doesn't like to talk about herself, does she, I wonder if that's part of Mal's attraction. She's a mystery.


Wednesday, 13 July 2011 20:24
Thank you for the feedback!
This section was great fun to write.

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