Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

The Bouncing Ball Ch 4

Saturday, October 9, 2010

Jane 0904 and my joint effort... so far so good. Thanks all for reading and thanks 'Ski for the great character loan. Cat feels unwelcome...

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CHAPTER FOUR

Cat ran up the ramp, seeing Kaylee disappearing through the top hatch back towards her domain. Batha was at her heels, a little ungainly from the animal in her mouth, but she was safely aboard when Cat slammed her hand down on the door control. The inner doors slid together, not quite closed before they felt the Firefly take off.

"Gorramit," Hank muttered, heading up the metal stairs two at a time. "She's always tryin' to take my job." As he approached the top the floor twisted and he had to hang onto the railing to prevent himself being tossed over the side.

The internal dampeners caught up, but only for a second as the floor tilted the other way. A whine, not entirely from the engine room, grew louder, seeming to make the bulkheads vibrate in sympathy, then there was a jerk and everyone was thrown forward.

"Missile," Hank said, his knuckles white.

"They're shooting at us?" Mal's temper finally snapped. "Those wahng-ba dan duh biao-tze are firing on my gorram ship?"

"I think so," Hank confirmed. "It missed us," he added, ever the optimist.

Fury tightened Mal's face. He pointed at Cat and Declan. "You - stay here."

The redhead shrugged. "No place else to go."

"Frey, you ... hey, where are you going?"

"To help Kaylee," his wife said. "Like you wanted."

"Can I get a damn order out before you read it?" He sounded exasperated, but it wasn't really directed at her.

She flashed him a smile and slid away through the hatch.

The Firefly shuddered again and Mal glared at Hank.

"I'm going, I'm going," the pilot promised, pulling himself up the last couple of steps. "I'll try and stop River turning us into a smear on the landscape." He staggered through the doorway, wondering if he was going to lose his lunch.

"I'd take it as a kindness," Mal said, with only the faintest touch of sarcasm. He followed the other man, glancing only once down into the cargo bay.

"Well ... this is fun," Declan said as another lurch threatened to deposi

Comments
Saturday, 09 October 2010 14:23
Heh heh... poor Simon & Mal.

'Tis good stuff, please keep it up.
Saturday, 09 October 2010 14:45
Loved this and Simon should re-think calling himself a mushroom seeing as how they are not only kept in the dark but fed on *goushi*. I am glad that Frey senses Cat and Bantha are important and that she has also picked up their connection to alternate Mal even if she doesn't yet know the fine detail. I'm wondering who was in that ship they fried and whether they got off a transmission before River went to full burn. Shiny as always, my friend! Ali D :~)
"You can't take the sky from me!"
Saturday, 09 October 2010 22:47
Mushroom.... LMAO
Monday, 11 October 2010 10:52
Sometimes methinks it might be better being a mushroom…..lol. Nicely done Angelle and Jane0904. I knew there was trouble abrewin when Cat and her crew were invited aboard. Mal seemed to recognize it too. So I’m wandering what will be happening on the way to Persephone?

Ready for more…..BP

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