Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Control (Prologue)

Thursday, September 2, 2010

The beginning of an arc...or is it the ending?! LOL! For those who keep me writing....Jane, Ali, Z, Brian...thanks y'all...you have no idea what you mean to me.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3466    RATING: 10.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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The firelight cast eerie shadows over the crew as they talked, Mal and Inara, Jayne with Kitty on his feet dancing her around, and River smiling as Kaylee brushed her hair. Even Zoe looked happy, her dark lips smiling as Simon offered her a hand for a dance. Everyone was content, well, almost everyone.

Cat's body was almost to the point of a full recovery, stiffness in her ribs and muscles still caused her issues, but slowly it was beginning to fade. Simon had once again done wonders, even though her own healing had fixed most of the wounds. Still, dealing with Reavers was never fun.

Something on the wind alerted her, the smell of death from both a ship and its occupants. It wasn't a good smell and it was close by. Falling back into the shadows, her beautiful body morphed as the extra set of ribs popped into place to make room for a larger lung capacity as well as the growth of her heart. Whatever stiffness that was there was gone. Fangs dipped from her mouth lengthening as her nails turned into claws. Silently she thanked Kitty for her ability or the transformation for woman to monster would have never taken place, but with the smell of prey on the air, it was time for her beast to hunt.

With a final look to her crew, her people, Cat blended into the night and as she passed around the firelight as not to be seen, Mal thought he saw something out the corner of his eye. Like a warning wind before a devastating storm, she was gone.

"Zo, where's Cat?"

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Saffron was trapped, not quite sure how she got into this particular situation, but knew without a miracle she was not getting out. Her hand hurt, the infection was spreading into the other digits and if she did not find a real hospital soon, she was lose the hand as well, but right now that was the least of her worries.

Around her, Reavers hissed, a scouting ship that had dropped out of the sky moments before and had stumbled up her as she rested at the abandoned farm north of the town she was headed for. Thankfully, Kay

Comments
Thursday, 02 September 2010 23:19
I take it that Safferon is meant to be Saffron? The spelling threw me for a bit. I liked how Cat sensed the ship and the Reavers and did what was needed with that final warning to Saffron. Wonder whether she will actually take note this time and be truthsome. Ali D :~)
"You can't take the sky from me!"
Thursday, 02 September 2010 23:22
I think I fixed most of them...but yes, it is suppose to be Saffron. We shall see how honest she can be soon enough. ;)
Friday, 03 September 2010 00:39
I don’t ever recall seeing Saffron as humbled as she seemed to be here. I still don’t trust her, and I’m hoping she becomes devilishly deceitful again. Just makes it that more fun when someone gets even with her.

Enjoyed this a lot Angelle, Z
Friday, 03 September 2010 12:17
I don't believe Saffron can be honest - she doesn't know what it is. And if she tried she's only going to be honest from her own point of view, which is twisted as it is. After all, she believes everyone plays parts, so to her true integrity and honesty doesn't exist.

Great start, Angelle. Excellent action, and I can't wait to read more!

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