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Monsters and Demons

Thursday, August 19, 2010

Just a one shot....a first person Cat 1313 story for Jane 0904 and for BrowncoatE3...both of you mean a great deal to me...anyway, Cat meets Monsters

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3697    RATING: 10.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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based on world of Firefly by Joss Whedon

Cat 1313 is mine...all else see top...

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Pit Pat Pit Pat....It echoes in my head like a sick, but welcome drum beat. One drop, then another...like a clock setting its own rhythm. Serenity smells of blood and I can't help, but lick my lips, avoiding the protruding fangs as my alert eyes and ears scan for any signs of life.

A gun snaps shut on my left and my body reacts, poised and ready to slaughter whatever happens to threaten my territory. Entrails slide off my hand as I do, and with a flick, I finish the job, flesh and some blood falling to the only clean spot on the bay ground. Jayne raises a hand, the shotgun pushed close to his chest as he points to something moving in the corner.

A growl beside me catches my eyes as well, the dark shiny coat of my favorite companion catching just a bit of the lights from above. Her fur is covered in blood, wet, and sticky, her mouth holding tight to an arm she had ripped off. A prize, I suspected, until she found something more meaty or tender. Unlike crows, Batha couldn't get to the eyeballs with her long claws, but there were other regions on humans as well as Reavers that were prime choice. At least her lust for human blood was merited...mine, not so much.

Zoe is the next to rise from the litter of bodies, her dark skin patched with scratches, and blood that isn't all hers. After all, if anyone would know, it's me. She looks at me for a moment, letting her almond shaded eyes slide down my body, clothes covered in rips and tears, red where blue and white should have been.

I still hadn't seen Mal, and that worried me. I could smell him, could feel the heat from his body, and could hear his unique way of breathing when he was both worried and angered. His scent came from the dining area, a place I had hoped would be spared from the shadow mob, but there had been too many. Way too many...

I could feel my wounds closing, slowly pressed from the damage done i

Comments
Thursday, 19 August 2010 12:32
Wow. Very powerful, and I love the way you suggest other happenings (Mal's hand being almost big enough to cover Cat's belly) with just a phrase. And while I am smiling at Batha and the image of her holding an arm in her mouth, I can also smell the blood, all copper and death ...

Plot bunny? Give me a little while to ponder, although a mention of someone Cat had bitten once but didn't expect to see again springs to mind. I'm not sure who you meant, but it's possible they might be in the village.

Wherever you go, I'll be reading!
Thursday, 19 August 2010 18:28
I really like this story Angelle. Cat the ever able destroyer / lover as always. I like your impressions of Jayne. Such a cool character to write.

A chapter 2.……I will look forward to.

As always, keep up your writing. You do it so well!

Z
Thursday, 19 August 2010 22:05
Awesome as always
Friday, 20 August 2010 15:36
Nice tense mood through all of this.
Monday, 30 August 2010 17:38
Love how fiercely protective Cat is. Had my heart in my mouth through most of this hoping that Mal would be alright. Very atmospheric too. Ali D :~)
"You can't take the sky from me!"

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