Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Cake, Candles, and a Double Barrel Shotgun Prt 1

Saturday, May 15, 2010

Another challenge issued by my friend and fellow writer, Jane. What happens when our little mechanic finds out Cat doesn't have a birthday and what she does to rectify this notion. A two parter with the other half posted soon....hope you enjoy...

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3588    RATING: 10.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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based on the world of Firefly by J. Whedon

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He watched the stars slowly slide by, a thought slipping back to the days where ships traveled on water, the waves sparkling as the moon caressed the sides of the wooden hull. It had been a good week, though maybe not exactly how he had wanted it to go. Still, when had it ever...A smile crossed his lips.

A presence behind him and the reflection of a reddish brown hair and blue overalls stared back at him in the windows, haloed by the stars as they twinkled. It had interrupted his thoughts, but he had gotten use to that. "Kaylee, aren't you gonna say something or just stand there hoping my boat will fall apart?"

"Don't say that, Cap'n. You'll hurt Serenity's feelings." Her hand placed on the metal bulkhead and the other one her hip as she tossed him an upset look. She was probably the only person he'd met that made you grin when she looked mad.

"Ain't standing there for your health. What is it or you hear to tell me why my ship's been a bit dodgy?"

"Told you before, we need new belts, but I can't do nothing 'til we're grounded."

"Need money first. Fanti will pay us once we hit Beaumonde." He looked at the console before glancing back at her. "We're about a day out. "Now, that it?"

"I..." She was hesitant, unlike how she usually was, and turned to walk away. Taking a deep breath, the mechanic spoke. "When's Cat's birthday?"

"Hunh?" Mal was taken aback, first by her question and second, because he had no answer. Cat didn't talk about her conception much or the day she had been 'born'. It was a sore subject and one that he didn't want for her to have to relive more than she already did in her sleep.

"I rightly don't know, Kaylee. Cat don't speak of it and I ain't about to ask."

"Everyone needs a special day, Cap'n. Ain't right she don't got one just 'cause she wasn't born the same way we were." He saw the look in her pretty eyes, the one that the cheery little mechanic always got whe

Comments
Saturday, 15 May 2010 16:18
I find the shotgun inclusion in the title strangely ominous.

Aw, Jayne is family. And Kaylee, with the happy making, and strawberries.
Saturday, 15 May 2010 17:09
Love it. And a great take on the bunny - not Cat's actual birthday but a celebration of her being on Serenity. I find your writing very ... sensuous, in the sense of using the senses (trying to find a better way of putting that, but failing miserably!) to create the scene. And Mal's preference for cake? Mmn, feeling hungry ...
Sunday, 16 May 2010 12:13
Chocolate and strawberries....


I'll be in my bunk...
Monday, 30 August 2010 17:15
I think celebrating how long Cat has been on Serenity is the much better path to take. Less likely to be laced with bad memories. And Kaylee really has forgotten the meaning of the word subtle :~) Ali D
"You can't take the sky from me!"

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