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Feline Thoughts

Monday, May 10, 2010

A first person look at Cat....as she lays awake next to Mal (a challenge put forth by Jane0904. Hope you enjoy, girlfriend!)

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3528    RATING: 10.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Based on the world of Firefly by J. Whedon

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I smell him...I smell everything. It's my curse and it's my burden, but on most days, it is also my salvation.

Mal, my Alpha stirs next to me, the scent of war and the crew covering him as well as mine, my mark to fend off others like me, though I know they are all gone. My Creators aren't foolish enough to lose control on another such as I, the consquences of their actions with Miranda has made them untrustworthy to the general public. It was time to mend fences, a feat no one on Serenity thought thay could pull off. Me...humans have one major flaw, they trust what can easily kill them and they put that trust in ones that care little for them and more for the almighty dollar...or worse, ultimate control.

A sound and my darker one is up, her senses in high alert as I can feel her using me to analyze the threat. It's the big merc, Jayne. He moves toward the dining hall, probably hungry after dreaming of mating. As long as I stayed out of them, I could care. I had learned from being on this ship for a year now, the one things that concerned Jayne were money, women, and anything that went boom. Though strangely, he had started to care a little more about the people that inhabited the ship, or at least the ones that had been with him for awhile. I could still feel his untrust of me, but then that was something that seemed a common illness within the walls of this ship. They were smart to not trust me, if only Mal would realize that.

He stirs next to me again, nuzzling into my neck as I growl gently. Anyone who knew me was aware that my neck was sensitive. Anywhere there was a major vein or artery was sensual, something that came with my puzzle piece DNA. I relaxed into his touch, knowing he ws asleep and dreaming of family life. It hurt me that I couldn't have children for him, not because I wanted them, but because he would have made a good father. To me, cursing offspring with what I am is to offer them a death warrent before

Comments
Tuesday, 11 May 2010 02:09
I like the way you've woven a theme through this, darkness and the dark and darker halves and it being night. And Mal's planet, named after darkness.

Not quite human, but a person enough.
Tuesday, 11 May 2010 12:26
In a way, because Cat isn't entirely human, she loves more deeply. It's unconditional, even if she knows in the end it will hurt her, or she will hurt or cause hurt to happen to the one she loves. Mal, in this case. And 'Ski to a different degree.

I have to echo Byte - some of the phrasing is wonderful, and I was going to quote the Shadow reference!

I don't go the route of Mal having nightmares every night (although my Mal does suffer sometimes) but I love how you have Cat telling him the truth. He wouldn't expect anything less of her.

Thank you.
Tuesday, 11 May 2010 12:26
BTW, if I come up with another bunny, does that mean you'll write it? Oh, and vice versa, too!
Monday, 30 August 2010 17:04
This was perfect. I love the glimpse into Cat's thoughts and how she has adjusted her life to fit with Mal, the way the two of them are in sych even though they are are different in so many ways they aren't in those that matter most. Wonderful! Ali D :~)
"You can't take the sky from me!"

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