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In the Twilight

Sunday, September 20, 2009

Just another potential look at the way things might have gone. Years past the Miranda Wave, two crewmembers of Serenity meet again after a long absence.

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She paused for a moment, certain in some recessed part of her brain that she heard a sound she’d thought to never hear again, the distinctive whine of a Firefly coming into atmo. Ever graceful, she blinked slowly and smiled at the children looking up at her questioningly.

“You are right, Miss Inara?” Maggie asked, her little brown eyes bright with curiosity.

“I am well, thank you,” Inara replied calmly. “Now, where were we?”

Relieved, Maggie hopped a little on her feet. “S’cussin’ proper etiqu….eti…manners,” she finished.

Inara smiled at the child gently. “Of course,” she said. “The word is ‘etiquette’. And it is a very important word indeed.” Gesturing gracefully for the little girls to take their seats around the long table, she began once again to patiently teach her young charges while relegating the hauntingly familiar sound of a particular engine to the back of her mind where it belonged.

The morning, as mornings typically did, passed quickly into afternoon and the children, eager to be free of their classes, ran down the dirt road that led from Inara’s home to the small settlement a few miles away. Inara stood in her doorway for a moment, watching them go with equal parts sorrow and relief. Every day with the small group of girls was a treasure to her, and yet their restless energy reminded her all too well of the restlessness that had once driven her from a life of wealth and privilege out into the Black. The memory was not something she allowed herself to dwell upon for very long.

Sighing, she turned back into the house just long enough to retrieve a basket and a small pair of gardening scissors. She realized that unconsciously she had been expecting to have a visitor all day long, though she knew the very idea of it was patently absurd. Blowing out a deep breath, she set out for her small garden. It was a daily ritual, much as meditation had been in years past. And she could allow that working the soil in her well-worn gloves was indeed a sort of therapy for her e

Comments
Sunday, 20 September 2009 04:48
*sniff* That was perfect and the way the last show of 7 seasons should have ended.
Sunday, 20 September 2009 08:18
Already commented over at FF.net, but just for the record, I loved this. So Mal kept his hair, then ...
Sunday, 20 September 2009 09:18
About gorram time too! I could actually see things panning out this way, the passage of time needing to be the percolation of common sense both of them needed. My favourite line was 'She knew instantly that the smile on Mal's face was the last thing she would remember on the day she died'. That made me all teary with the truthsomeness of it. I thought you handled the characters beautifully and am glad that they are finally going to be together. A sweet ending indeed. Ali D :~)
"You can't take the sky from me!"
Sunday, 20 September 2009 12:58
That was perfect. They finally get their act together and it's not too late for either one of them. Sigh. A great tearjerker and one of the best fics I have ever read on this subject - just two mature people finally coming home to each other and knowing what they both want. Sad about Zoe though. It must have been hard for Mal to leave her. But you left yourself a lot of ways to revisit this story!
Sunday, 20 September 2009 16:12
I'm glad to see you writing this pairing, again. And, this one really shows growth in your understanding of their relationship, as it is a more mature look at the both of them.

One thing I never get is Mal and Zoe, though, when presented this way, if he feels that responsible for Zoe and can't leave her, why does he? Is he finally putting Inara first in his life? It sounds like she's been living in her little cottage (which, by the way, your description is outstanding) for quite some time. Wouldn't it have been obvious as to what Inara wanted and needed from life? I guess if I was Inara, these nagging questions would be rattling around in my head (a girl thing, of course) and I would be questioning Mal's sincerity since it has taken him this measure of time to commit to an honest conversation and relationship. Unresolved issues can fester in any relationship especially one like this where two people have shared long and deep feelings for each other.

Anyway, nicely written, and a beautiful ending for Firefly. Thanks for posting!
Sunday, 20 September 2009 18:26
Yes, this. Beautiful!
BLKHERO69
Monday, 21 September 2009 08:37
Any of my words would be woefully insufficient, so I'll simply say... TEN.

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