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The Big Goodbye

Friday, June 5, 2009

Chapter 61....and the final chapter in this little fanfic....hope you all enjoy and be prepared for more adventures in the coming months...thnx for riding....

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3123    RATING: 10.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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The Big Goodbye

based on the World of Firefly by Joss Whedon

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"So you leaving us?" Mal asked as he watched 'Ski pack his bags.

"Don't act like it breaks your heart, Reynolds. She might be yours now, but she is still my wife." 'Ski growled, but then just shook his head. " We can fight about her until we kill each other, but Babe will pick who she wants. Simple as that and just so you know, she plans on riding with you for at least awhile."

"I know."

"Good. By the way, I see how you look at that Companion. May not be any of my business, but you and Cat is. You want to get freaky with Inara, then so be it, but break Cat's heart in the process...and even the Devil won't stop me from sending you to hell."

"Brave words for someone leaving her behind."

"I'm leaving her here because she wants to be here and if I don't leave, she will eventually end up in my arms and then in my bed."

Mal tensed and frowned at his remark.

"Relax. As for as I am concerned, she has kept faithful to you, not that we haven't had our close calls. Truthfully, she wants to be in one place for awhile or at least have a home. Me? I'm not sure what I really want."

"You'll know when the time comes. Might even go the way of a ship's captain. You are one helluva pilot."

“ Maybe. Not that I’m thinkin’ about settlin’ mind you. But should I get bored of hitching around the ‘Verse one day.” ‘Ski explained.

“ 'Ski, not just any boat can become a home.” Mal explained “She’s gotta be special.”

“So how do you know?”

The Captain seemed to think about it for a moment, and then chuckled to himself.

“Can’t rightly say. But you’ll know it when it happens. You’ll see her, and not be able to live without her.”

"Strange..." 'Ski grabbed his duffel bag and tossed it over his shoulder. "Think I know just what you mean." He frowned, bumping Mal as he walked out the door. 'Ski needed to find Cat.

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She stood with her back to her new home an

Comments
Friday, 05 June 2009 23:19
This has been a good story with lots of action and some really wrenching emotional moments too. I feel sorry for Ski and Mal, both of them in love with Cat but knowing they can only have part of her. For now she is with Mal but one day she will leave him and go back to Ski. I really feel sad she is made that way as it isn't fair to any of them and that includes Cat herself. As for Falcon, I can't help thinking he isn't actually dead just gone away to lick his wounds and plot an even nastier kind of revenge. Thanks for a rollercoaster ride, my friend. Ali D :~)
"You can't take the sky from me!"
Sunday, 07 June 2009 12:34
I agree with Amdobell - this isn't fair on any of them, least of all Mal. Although she's with him right now, he must know there's a part of her that will never be his, and until she sorts that out, he doesn't have the one whole person he needs in the 'verse. I see sequels ... Good stuff, Ange, and here's to more!
KAS
Wednesday, 17 February 2010 04:12
Angellemarcs,

I've only recently started read (and enjoying!) your stories and think you are a very talented writer.

I only have one small (very small!) nit to pick. I spent hours sorting through all the stories here trying, and sometimes failing, to locate the next chapter!

I never did find parts 1-5 7, 8, 13, 21, 22, 30, 51 & 54 ---- grrrr (grin)

I'm sure the story would be far better if I could read all of it ...

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