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Keeping On: Part 8 - Mail Call

Friday, March 13, 2009

A year after the Miranda broadcast, Mal and Zoe struggle to keep their family together and keep flying as situations begin to build on Serenity. <i>Mail Call</i>: The crew arrives at the Sky Bazaar and Jayne receives a letter from home that makes him more than a little anxious.

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Keeping On: Part 8 - Mail Call

Disclaimer: Firefly, Serenity, and all related characters are copyright 2002-2005 Mutant Enemy, Inc., Universal Pictures, and 20th Century Fox. This is a work of fanfiction. No copyright infringement is intended.

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The crew – now eight – had their first meal together and things were strained at best. Inara barely spoke a word to anyone and Kaylee did her best to keep the conversation going. Jayne seemed interested only in eating and Simon kept his attention on Kaylee and his sister. Mal and Zoe weren’t really talking and Lilah was struck by how awkward the situation was. She couldn't help but say as much.

“I used to think that no dinner could possibly be more awkward than the time I ended up eating with my old flight instructor while in the buff. Apparently I was wrong, because this tops it on a few different levels.”

The conversation stopped abruptly as the crew took in her words. River snorted and laughed and Jayne’s eyes took on a leering glint. The rest simply looked scandalized.

“You had dinner with your flight instructor? While you were naked?” Mal asked incredulously.

“I lost a bet.” Lilah said shortly, staring very intently at her food as she picked at it with her chopsticks.

“A big one, I’m guessing.” Zoe remarked.

“Oh, you’re not wrong.” She agreed and finally cracked a smile. “But other than the lack of clothing, it wasn’t so bad. I just couldn’t look him in the eyes after that. Or his wife’s eyes. She was there, too. But that’s a story for a different time – one better suited to a setting not at the dinner table.”

Jayne began to laugh, a deep rumble that sounded surprisingly pleasant, given his general attitude. “Guess it’s good to know that you’re a heathen like the rest of us.” He said. “Except maybe Inara.”

“Oh, I’m a heathen now?” Simon quipped. “I feel so very proud.”

The crew laughed and it was as though the ice had been thawed at least a little bit.

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Retreating into the room

Comments
Saturday, 14 March 2009 00:45
I agree with your post-Serenity Jayne: I think that one scene in the movie, after they've been to Miranda and Jayne slides Simon some of the alcohol he's drinking that he could let go of the issues he had with the Doctor and River.
Saturday, 14 March 2009 02:28
Interesting take on Jayne. I never really thought of him not liking change. After all, he changed crews quickly enough when given a better chance. You're setting up some interesting dynamics between people - looking forward to more.
NOREASTBROWNCOAT
Saturday, 14 March 2009 10:25
I've been reading 'Keeping On' for a bit now and I am truely empressed. I look forward for more, keep flying.

NE Browncoat
Saturday, 14 March 2009 11:23
Good to see another chapter up and it is nice to see you developing Lilah's relationship with various members of the crew at this pace. Just signing on and being instant friends rarely happens in life so this take is very believable. I like how Jayne has matured and yet still is Jayne. And Mal and Inara getting on better? That's always good news even if I hold my breath to see how long it will last. I get the feeling there is great sadness in our new pilot's past and hope this will be the crew to heal her. Ali D :~)
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